All Comments on 'The Investigation Ch. 03'

Harry, thanks for another fantastic story! Always a pleasure to see you have posted another literary masterpiece. Hope to see a follow up.

Excellent story. So long in coming I had to read the other two again. Is there another investigation that our intrepid naked FBI trio will become involved in? If so, looking forward to it.

Devir Ginator

Another great story in this series! Can't wait for the next installment!

I feel it's better to have continuity in the story line from chapter to chapter.Chapter 2 left off and then ch 3 came in and took off in a completely different direction. A part of the fun of the fantasy in fiction is that it's actually plausible out there in the real world.

Chapter 2 hit the mark well enough to be believable with a little bit of imagination.

Chapter 3 needed too many unlikely things to happen in order for the story line work.

For me: I love getting lost in a well crafted story. The sex just adds spice ;-)

Nice story, and very erotic!

On a technical note, they're not 'clips.' They're 'magazines.' I had to throw that due to my previous life...

This series keeps getting better and better. I’m enjoying the read very much.

It was superb until last part..... then it turned disgusting.....

While I’m always waiting for another Harry story, this was a jolting transition from chapter 2 which was setting us up for our protagonists’’ leaving the FBI. Now, they’re firmly back, promoted, and having sex with a subordinate, creating a career-ending action not only with the FBI, but employment in general. The author has a history of well-crafted works, which are opposite this latest sub-par chapter.