All Comments on 'The Invitation Ch. 02'

This was good enough, as far as it goes, but it seems a little slight and off-topic. Part one was a raunchy and enjoyable tale of mother/son fucking. Yet part two mostly ignored it. I think most incest/taboo fans want the focus to be in the incestuous relationship, rather than a load of new (non-incestuous) plot lines. I would hope, if you wish to continue with this story, you might get back to some raunchy mother/son fucking.

Thanks for the continuation of this series. A good subplot but it'll be better to go back on the main plot. Hope to see that soon in the next chapter.

Anticipation for chapter 3 is killing me! Hope it'll be real hot it's worth waiting for!!!

Author has good writing skills. Develops characters in breadth but needs to work on depth. I would like to see this story developed into a multi-chapter series. Plenty of subplots have been started. All charters are likable and believable.

Awesome story please continue with more!!!!!!!!!!

Have been checking on the next chapter for the last several months. I guess I'm kinda addicted to this story line. Can't wait for the next chapter!

Still no chapter 3

Why did you end this chapter?

Looking forward to the next chapter.

Checking on for the next chapter ... And nothing updated yet ... will keep checking back ...

Hopefully this gets a part 3!

This needs a part 3

Pls add next chapters, it´s great story.

Надеюсь что в 3 части окажется что отец трахает сестёр

Father shouldn't know ever. However, do a 3rd part please.

Hoping for 3rd part and hopefully it's coming soon ...

Seeing that it's taking this long for the next chapter, I guess David's world came crashing down.

Seeing that there hasn't been any new chapter after months of waiting, I guess the fun is done for now.

I gave you 5* but I wish David was less timid.

Woohoo!!! David is back!!!

Loving this series 5 stars