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All Comments on 'The Lady in the Elevator'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
:)

Very cute story. I enjoyed the playful build up

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Well...

...going from Arthur's point of view to a narrator is confusing and suspends belief.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Fine

A good story but a lot more detail of him taking her-needed, far to rushed at the end.

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.... but not worn out. (Update 2022- Well maybe now, a little worn out :-) I would (Update 2022 -still) be happy to correspond with any real life ladies who might like to discuss any of the ideas appearing in my stories, or in fact most anything else probably. (Update 2022...