All Comments on 'The Landladies Contract Pt. 01'

Should be in Lesbian Sex......

It says 'Part One' - So you know what happens in future parts?

Terrific idea. Fascinating characters but, forgive me, I suspect English is not your first language. Can you ask someone to proofread your work?

Thank you Anonymous for your kind, sensible criticism. I will take on board what you say. These are the only rough sketches for a bigger work. I'm aware of needing a proofreader, but the one's I have tried to use has left a lot to be desired. Can you recommend anyone? I hope you get this message and not expecting a barrage of abuse. I always appreciate constructive criticism no matter how much it hurts. I've found that the more it hurts the more truthful the criticism is. I do take notice and improve little by little each time. Please get in touch. Thanks again.