All Comments on 'The Last Coven'

A few spelling and grammar errors in the beginning but overall a good read.

Overall not bad. There were some word usage errors here and there (know instead of no for example) and it seemed like there was continuity lapses in the shower scene. The ritual waas hot but a little confusing with all the numbering. Keep working at it!

"The Last Coven" was a decent story, all concerned. The author should polish his work more to correct word usage and spelling. Additionally, a few scenes seemed too busy or populated to really work. The ceremony scene seemed to take a long time -- too much build-up before we got to the sex.