All Comments on 'The Last Fishing Trip of the Year'

erotica. Thanks

I thoroughly enjoyed your story about Nick and Victoria. Like all good tales, I just wish it could have been longer. Thanks for writing it.

How anybody could be offended by this delightful story I do not know,its a fact of life these things happen.

if only the relationship of father and daughter could be excepted as the norm this world would be a far better place , i myself had a long and loving relationship with my mum many years ago , it did me more good than harm , and if by any chance your story is true then i congratulate you , if its just wishful thinking then please write some more in the same vain , either way it was a brilliantly written story well done

This was VERY VERY ENJOYABLE reading... Am definitely hoping for a part 2 and 3 of this one. Only suggestion I could possibly make is more detail with regards to activities and describing body etc...

Keep up the excellent job, and keep writing!!!! This category is definitely right for you!

I loved the story very much. she did a great job getting her dad to make love to her. i know it is hard to seduce a dad. It took me ages to have mine.

Anita.

This was so much more than the usual crap dished out at LITEROTICA. Such a wonderful sensitive tale of love with no unnecessary frills to make us want more. A tale told so well that, despite the theme, the reader will not be offended. While it can stand alone it would be a shame not to continue with a few more chapters. Outstanding writing SCORPIO! A true fan, Pete.

beautiful story. Made my pussy quiver!!

Great story, way above the usual Literotica standard.

More of a love story than just incest.

One I shall read over and over again.

Can we make being so creative a crime with the punishment being the better you are the more you have to share. I am sure that way scorpio would never leave his house.

a nice little tale - could just imagine being caught in a snow storm like that having experienced it myself but no women around. I love fly fishing and skill required to cast - it also keeps you working your fly and line all the time on a river and then the thrill of playing a fish when you have it hooked. Great when you catch a fish, especially on a fly you have tied yourself.

Some are more revealing that others... Especially when we can be honest with each other and our selves.

a nice little tale...but always watch the weather when you go off fishing on your own...good thing she went to rescue him....bit daft hiding the clothes when they were cold but at least she got daddy to fuck her and he will do when they go on fishing trips...best catch he'll ever get...wonder what sort of fly he will use....probably a dog nobbler....nice one

I think it was one of the best I have read in a very long time..Thank you for this story.

And that is a good way to put it. It's not a piece of trash, or a slam Bam thank you ma'am, it is a legitimate story about a father and a daughter, correct that, a daughter demanding that her father see her as she truly is; a beautiful young woman, and not the boy he wanted from birth.