All Comments on 'The Lonely Salesman Ch. 03'

Wonderful tale of love and romance. Could have been too sugar sweet, but it was just the right degree for me. Loved it

I am impressed with your talent for the fine details

of love and romance - loved reading it and the way you kept the pace going - the sort of story we fantasise about and wish 'if only that could or would happen to me' - but then you wake up to the harsh reality of life - still no one can stop you dreaming and hoping. Well done - love your writing style.

Romance story telling doesn't get any better than this. Chapter 3 is a marvelous conclusion to a real tear-jerker of a story. One has a real feeling for the characters, and the plot never drags for a moment, from the first sentence to the last. The Lonely Salesman is an outstanding story in every aspect, and deserves a 5 star rating.