All Comments on 'The Man Who would be Queen Ch. 04'

For a erotic story your chapters are way to short with no action. There needs to be more sex or feminization rather than side fluff. 4 short chapters now and little to no action. You are causing readers to lose interest

While I don't agree that you need to write more x or y I do agree that the chapters are short. I wouldn't mind a dip in quality if that would mean longer chapters.

To be blunt the first chapter is way better than the following, I'm not saying that there is a bad chapter I'm saying that you could have lower quality and it would still be good, just wish that it could be longer.

He should have been sucking dick by chapter 2

Frankly I wish he didn't suck dick by the second chapter, but I might not be the target audience as I'm here for the power dynamic and world.

I love people who complain about a good story that isn’t just smut. And seeing how we are not paying for this nobody has a right to criticize chapter length either. I’d rather get something in shorter bites then nothing at all in longer ones. Interesting story and slow burn. I like that this is not just an instant transformation and it genuinely questions the morality of such actions. Frankly the way the world we currently live in is going I wouldn’t be surprised to see forced gender reassignment become an actual punishment for thought criminals.