All Comments on 'The Manor House Ch. 03'

Hello,

I enjoyed parts 1 & 2 very much. Part 3 is very good too. But the last little ending needed a bit more. Having John just tie a red ribbon on Sarah's wrist was a little let down. I'm glad you finished this story.

Curious7lady

about time.. but worth the wait. was hoping for a longer installment, but looking forward to part 4

I had a horrible feeling that Gloria’s stepson was going to mess up and hurt Sarah, it just comes across as dangerous that an untrained Dom would be given free reign like that. It’s a shame you gave up on the story there’s an awful lot of potential in this story.

Wanted more of Sarah and the young boy and the ending was way to quick and neat. Otherwise great story, very well done.

Absolutely loved it. So many years have passed since you wrote this story, I wonder what these characters are up to now?

Great job all the way through. Thanks for a very good read.