All Comments on 'The Marriage of Martin Hastings Ch. 07'

Sorry but this chapter just made it to obverse and Martin to stupid.

Have a good one

Regards Tilleydog.

it's just getting interesting... don't be discouraged by adverse comments

Your story is one of the best in a long time. Please do not stop. Your writing is very creative and exciting to read.

please continue i really cant wait till the next chapters. youre a really good writter and got a wonderful imagination, look forward to read more and more please continue quickly

Please continue this story. I really look forward to the next episode. There will always people be that criticise. I really like reading the episodes, and think they are great.

Thanks.

Please keep it going

I must have missed them, the adverse comments people are talking about. I have enjoyed all of your stories I have read on Literotica, which brings me to a bone I have to pick with you. You are writing what I think is a great story on 'The Marriage of Martin Hastings' and you have 10 additional chapters but you want to take this time to rest and not put out any more chapters.

This is cruel to tease your readership like this. I'm sure I speak for a lot more people when I say to give us all of what you have done so far.

Thanks and keep all of your stories going, they are very good.

xoxo

Stefani V.

Its your choice but I think most of us reading this story would not like to wait too long for the next episode. Can

I just add that in my opinion your writing is in the top

of the class here. Thanks for your efforts

Your story is wonderful! I love the idea of a society where it's accepted for a gurl and man to marry and live as man and wife. My own fantasy is life as a wife with my handsome, masculine, and powerful husband. I'd raise his babies as if they were my own, wear the engagement ring and wedding set he gave me on our wedding day (many carats of diamonds, of course!) and keep myself beautiful by going to the gym and salon. My nails would always be long and perfectly polished, and he would feel them in his shoulders as he made love to me each night and morning in our bed. Unlike the main character of your story, I'd delight in knowing my husband's sperm was alive and deep inside me all day as he worked and I went about my wifely and motherly duties...

Thankyou so much

please keep it cumming

doth protest much too much, methinks. He's Johnny one-note, almost too stupid to try some other tactic -- bribery, seductive trickery, sham consent, passive aggressive resistance, or just plain make categoical demands in exchange for supposed cooperation, as any woman would. And think how much more exciting the story would become if despite himself he found his body seduced by the Baron, or the desire to keep his money, or in plain language, a stiff dick sliding inside his ass! (Yum!). The women similarly should be engaging him, challenging him to enjoy what they enjoy and sharing their sisterly confidences with him. He needed to be altered internally as well as in his appearance, however reluctantly!

This confirms it ... it was Missy who is the instigator. I can't wait to see Martin forced to get a sex change with boobs and everything. I guess Missy is taking it out on him rather than the control man she married (who is dead). For Missy, sins of the father really mean something.

I'm eager to see the next few chapters and more degradations and humiliations of dear Martin. I can't wait to have him start sucking cock and pretending to like it all. I'm waiting for the scene where he begs to be fucked in the ass and does a reverse cowgirl on Baron.

Please keep these stories coming........

"...My ass wasn't designed to have a dick in it anymore than yours is Martin. In the beginning it hurt, and it hurt a lot, but I was butt fucked regularly by your dad regardless. Sure, over time I learned to enjoy it and maybe you will too; but it took a long before I found myself wanting to be penetrated that way. So remember that." she stood up. "I am very insulted that you would think that way Martin."

1 leanne... 2 baron... 3 missy

To be honest, I wasn't really feeling it til I read the last pRagraph on this chapter, now I'm full force. Plz give him titties later on.

Martin's level of humiliation while interacting with the stepmother he abhors must be nearly intolerable.