All Comments on 'The Mist of Time Ch. 20-21'

I enjoyed this chapter as well. Keep them coming.

If another author had posted this as a two page romance story, I would not of read this. I am very happy that I did. Of course, seeing Kezza's authorship would have drawn my attention because I like everything that he has written!

Another exceptional chapter - perhaps the best yet.

Gray! Dammit sir you are supposed to be an Englishman. The colour is grey as you well know.

It is still a excellent story. Please continue.

leaving so much unresolved in present time

Excellent usage of vocabulary, although we had the bones of this in previous chapters, the tone and emotion conveyed in this one elevate it above the rest, it makes for compelling reading!

wow, just wow. history lesson and romance. So present day Daniel is more than just a "Chandler blood line".. LOL, wonder how many illegitimates present day Queen has or old Prince Phillip? LOL

re gray vs grey. I've always of grey as being 'greyer' than gray, so I replaced the 50 shades with three: light Confederate gray, darker Wermacht grey and charcoal. Adelaide tells of a classy love story. She puts the 'Lit' in Literotica.

Anon56