All Comments on 'The Naked and the Dead Ch. 03 - Final'

My main comment about The Investigation was it wasn’t Noire (where usually the dame sets up the guy), but actually just a Crime Story. The Naked is a great example of a crime erotica genre. Personally, I didn’t like the ending with the firing, but as an author I understand why you’d do that. I could see this as a book in an airport, if there were more stories anchored to the nudist resort and its guests. I still gave it 5*, And congratulate you on an enjoyable and well written story.

I love your stories. But this series didn't work. Too much crime investigation; not enough sex.