All Comments on 'The Naked and the Dead'

Brilliant as always and a good storyline too.

Can't wait for the next installment, though I will have to

There is no question that I am hooked and looking forward to the next chapter. The point of stopping adds an element of suspense that I do not recall from other stories. Being teased like this seems to bring me into the story in an unfamiliar and delightful way.

All and all, this has the makings of another great series. Please get right to work on the next installment.

I liked it too!

Please write the next part fast! Smile

I can’t wait to read what’s next

What more can I say, WOW. Bring on the rest of the story

Excellent story so far. By all means, you should continue

Good read ! Hope we don't have to wait long for the next installment.

Great story so far, but seems it may be starting to get a bit silly. Hope I'm wrong on that.

I like your mystery stories, and I love the combination with the exhibitionism. My only criticism would be the presence of some uncaught typos. Needs a little more proofreading, but plot, characters, and theme are all well done!

Definitely need to keep going on this one!!

Excellent story, as always. You are my favourite author on Literotica.

Well done. Thank you for sharing your work.

Good job and probably why I have you as a favorite. Interested to see where the next installment goes. Also fun to see someone else writing about Ohio.

Lived just north of Cincinnati for 15 years, miss it a lot. Don't hesitate starting part 2, your stories have always been entertaining. You are one of the top 5 writers here, hands down.

I throughly enjoyed both the mystery and the eroticism. Definitely keep moving the story forward. The fact that both of the victims were divorced was a surprise and brought new questions to my mind as to what the motive for the crime truly was. I am anxiously waiting for the next chapter.

Wow! Another great beginning! Looking for the next chapter with these real life characters

Yes we love murder mysteries, then you throw in new love, maybe, and nudity, whats not to like! Can't wait for more, but alas i must. Five stars.

When I see your name as author I know I'm in for a well written story. This one has the right mix of nudity/exhibitionism with the mystery story line. Keep up the good work!