All Comments on 'The Naughty Family Ch. 02'

Quite the hot and fun story, hehe. Thanks a lot for your effort an dkeep up the great work. ^__^

...Diane :)

maybe some day she'll marry Scotty, but keep on fucking Daddy?

It has been a long time since I have read such an enjoyable incestuous tale. Your vocabulary and your grammar is impeccable and had me looking up words in the dictionary, making the story that much hotter to me. Please don't leave us hanging long as this story line is HOT, HOT, HOT!!! Keep up the wonderful work!

Loved it so much. The only potential problem is bro being jealous he wasn't first. With super hot ma and sis, and his love of hardcore, no problem luring him in.

Loved it...simply loved it. Wonderful story so far and it flows very well. Very exciting build up and getting the mother involved.

I think that that this is about the best incest storie that I have ever had the pleasure of reading.................................THANK YOU

Really good descriptions and dialoguie

Chile Peeler

I can;t wait for the next chapter to cum :)

There would never be a war again.

Straight from the pedo files. By a pedophile !!!!

I'm glad that Dad finally got to fuck his mentally disturbed daughter. Your fans think this story is well-written. Uh-huh. I take it that neither you nor they know the meaning of the word "womb." By the way, "snatch' is an insulting slang word. You'd never use it when referring to the cunt of someone you cared about.

But onward and upward into perversion.

Sally in Northridge CA

The intensity gets higher and higher. Where can it go from here without getting repetitive? One small criticism--- overuse of the word incestuous.

Superlative....just great writing. I know this represents an awful lot of work.....thanks for you efforts. I really enjoy so many of your contributions to the literature!

Great fucking writing. You really know how to paint a picture!

If only i had a daughter like theone in the stories i am sure that i would go blind many thanks for the pleasure you have gave

Unrealistic and taboo and all the rest but what a wild ride!

wow - loved this story. really, really sexy!!

but I think Saundra may be thinking on including Scott in the incestuous mix. Who knows, he may already be fucking his mother. Anyway, more chapters please.

This is a most enjoyable story. Only in fiction can we find characters (people) so mentally, emotionally, and psychoogically mature that they can love one another without conditions, shame, self-loathingand/or self-recrimination. Again, only in fiction, whatever activities happens between mutually consensual people is no one business. When humans recognize that love has no boundaries, only people do, maybe then we can mature. 5 star series.

That was incredibly hot. I loved the threesomes.

very sexy