All Comments on 'The Neighbour Ch. 02'

Great, arousing read, you really have a great talent. Ten out of ten from me.

Thank you for your submission.

Go ahead and suck cock and write about that. # 1

No one wants to read about cardboard characters acting in a predictably lame manner.Regardless of your subject matter, this just wasn't interesting or entertaining. Lacking any type of eroticism this simply wasn't fun to read. UGH!

I can't believe any Man alive would want or allow this. He should play out the night go home pack up and leave the dirty pig there would be a pile of people to be put in there place violently

love to see more of the night and onwards. maybe really sissify mike and get a few of those outfits up stairs on him and let him be her as well.

Hoping for part 3

..THAT WAS TRULY HORRIBLE.

Don't like that part, but the hot wife controlled by real man studs was great. Cuckold's wimp dick needs to introduced to chastity cage. Nice bright pink panties as well. Then taught to eat and clean creampie and nasty cum covered cock and balls. He can help fluff as well. Maybe the women would love to strap on fuck his sissy pussy as his wife takes on more real man sized cock and loads.

Well written and hot themes. Not sure why some lit users read stories they know in advance they will hate - must be nice to have time to waste.

Write more similar and ignore mentally unstable haters.

I don't want to read your little sissy stories. I don't understand why you chose to infest this category with them when FETISH is there for you to use.

Had it been in fetish I wouldn't have wasted the first three sentences and I wouldn't have voted. But you tried to pass it off as Loving Wives so you get * for dishonesty.

I am not a hater. But fetish is fetish.

They read what they know they will comp0lain about. They really like it (as many of us do) but are ashamed to admit it. Thanks for your effort.

Chapter 1 was entertaining but this just goes overboard. Not worth reading any further!

You flipped back and forth, who was actually fucking her, Mike or George. Also, whomever wasn't in her pussy was getting a blowjob from her, but then disappeared when she got carried to the couch? A little editing might make that clearer.

In Ch. 1 Ron was all pent-up, etc. hadn't been laid in forever, etc. But if these parties are going on and he is well known at them, why had he not gotten any? Did he need a date to attend? Maybe have him still "Ooo la la" over Linda's sunbathing and how she was much more attractive then what he was used to getting at his friends' swinging parties. That way it flows better into Ch.2 instead of hurting our suspension of disbelief.

I am enjoying the story and will continue, curious where it goes. Thanks for sharing it.

Mike I guess your just the husband now. Glad Val is working on you so you don't get lonely or angry. Its allready happened and its to late to close the barn door after the cows out.

Enjoy the best you can....

no voting crap

A while ago thirty years when we were first married I knew my wife desired a bigger cock so I figured I better get her one when I could participate or she would find one without me. Growing up in the 70's I have always had a pantyhosefetish (I still do) she indulged every chance she got. One night we were at a party she was wearing a very short skirt with suntan pantyhose no panties we were drinking and feeling frisky my boss was an attractive man 6'6" so I figured his cock would be huge compared to my four inches. She knew him better than I thought from previous meetings I knew he wanted to fuck her and her, him. She was hot 5'2" 21" waist thin shapely legs and high heels she was looking very edible. As I said my pantyhose fetish was overwhelming it seemed she was having an effect on most of the guys. Jim (my boss) told me how hot she was making him so I asked him if he wanted to fuck her. His jaw hit the ground and his saliva was pooling at my feet. I told him I would ask her she told me we hadn't done anything like that but, she was open to the idea if I would be in the room too. To this day she was the best cocksucker I have ever known. So we went to our bedroom away from the party and continued to drink as she was between us both our hands massaging her nylon legs my four was poking hard so I knew Jim had to be hard so I looked his cock was thick and probably 9 or 10 inches long his circumcised head was poking out from under his shorts she saw it too. She slid to the floor and kissed the head. She pulled his shorts down and engulfed it. She then asked me if we would double fuck her. She got on him after we tore a hole in her pantyhose and slid down on his monster she was leaking so much I rubbed her juice all over her ass and entered her easily. We got quite a rhythm going all night. That was only the beginning after that she cucked me and had me sucking her boys after that. She passed ten years ago it was fun till then

started strong went to sht at ch2

"So sissy your wife really is a hottie

I watched as the words appeared on the screen, transfixed by their meaning."

"my sissy cock"

this is the fastest ive seen a 4/5 story turn into a fcking failure