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by Earthlyone

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cageysea9725cageysea9725over 2 years ago

Besides the almost nonexistent plot, you need to put at least a little tiny bit of effort into typing.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Typos or Freudian slips aside, an intriguing tale . . .

Awaiting your next installment.

EarthlyoneEarthlyoneover 2 years agoAuthor

I click on cageysea9725's username to have a look at the plots and typing of his stories, to maybe learn a few things from him, but to my great surprise there aren't any...well I never! lol.

AnonymousAnonymous8 months ago

I’d like to know if David was aware of being her father. This begs for more of this tale.

It really seems unfinished.

Bill S.

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I'm new to erotic writing; I may not be great at it but I have lots of erotic ideas that I am putting in to words and putting out there on the off-chance it resonates with others.