All Comments on 'The Photo Album'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
Oh look another UK wimp and cuck writer.

You seem to write stories about women who are total sluts and whores. The two women so far in your stories are weak minded sluts. In your profile you seem to like clever women. I don't understand the connection. A clever woman would not fall for such bullshit as the two women in both your stories seem to. This story is fine if you have a Cuckold fetish, which I guess you do! You also claim to be single, good job really no woman would put up with such bullshit from you. Your other story wasn't that bad this one however sucks, big time!

But don't worry there are enough cucks and wimps and swingers on this site to enjoy this type of story. I have the misfortune of reading a story of yours I won't make the same mistake again.

mumblegooseeggmumblegooseeggabout 15 years ago
Excellent!

I still don't know why people who don't like this kind of story keep reading them and calling the author a wimp. Well, thi story had all my favorite themes (except for shaved pussy, which I don't carwe for) so you get a top score.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
Jesus!

Your Christmas present is a photo shoot of your wife fucking another guy and her telling your cockold ass he was better and she is going to keep doing it. Whats on tap for your anniversery she is having his kid, moving you to the guest bedroom? Your idea of a good time is deffiently not mine, your not even the reason she did this, she just wanted to fuck around on your wimp ass.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
Great story

I guess I am one of the wimp cucks that really loved this story. My wife travels alot in her business and I have encouraged her to take a lover while she is away and for her to call me while she is actually being fucked. That is quite a rush for me. I am very confident in my sexuality and her having other lovers does not take away from our love for each other.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
BRIT FAGGOT QUEER MASOCHIST VOMIT

I think that covers it.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
Ignore these comments

Take my advice and ignore these ignorant comments. Far too many people seem unable to appreciate the quality of writing in a story, or to understand that these ARE stories, not real life. So to those who have posted abusive comments, look, it's a STORY, right? It didn't really happen, the guy made it up. Is that plain enough for you?

roadbirdroadbirdabout 15 years ago
ok

so i take it that now her hubby gets to have sue for a weekend also....does that mean he can now have her cunt pierced and tattooed when he fucks it first so then mike can have his wives used cunt back in a different way than he has ever had it...only fair isnt it he got her cunt shaved first so shouldnt her hubby get sues pierced and tattooed first...give us a second chapter where her hubby gets sue for one of his 3 day conferences and gets to have his way with her while mike and beth wait at home in anticipation of seeing her new cunt and her used pussy and his wore out dick...he should fuck sue so much that he has to describe to his wife as she did him what they did and how hot sue was sucking his cock and how hot it was fucking on the beach and on his balcony...that will make him hard and beth wet thinking how well hubby fucked sue and now he can also pierce his wives tits and her clit and her cunt lips and see tha tshe gets about a dozen tattoos so that there can be no more surprises between them before they share wives again...and just think how nice their wives will look in those swim suits and in naked pictures for the netall peirced and with many tattsmike will love the new sue and probably beth also

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
I agree

a story does not necessarily reflect the personality of the author. But by accepting comments, it is only as expected that people react differently to a story. I think too that this sotry is a good writing but I do not relly like the story. The way it is described, it is obvious that he has ben set up by Sue and Mike along with his wife. It just makes me wonder if she has told all of the truth right from the beginning. As for Mike and Sue, how come that for a photographer without much "nude" sessions, all the sudden they have this contract for a fancy photoshoot, and they are setting up a website ? Something isn't right. It's only an assumption, but I believe his wife has had more contacts with this couple through her internet "investigations". Why not write some folluw-up Dick. Now you can have him going out for some fun on his own and see if they still have a marriage 12 months from now. Let me see how she evaluates their realtionship. Before going away on his trip, she refuses sex to her husband so she can be at her best for Sue and Mike. Upon his return, she "asks" for his consent to go and fuck Mike while he sits at home alone. Then she says it was the best fuck of her life and she wants to continue fucking Mike. Wow, isn't that something to look forward to. Becoming #2

to Mike (and Sue), how wonderful. Not.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
cockolded or not?

Sounds to me like this story isn't done yet. Is Beth going to turn hubby into a cockold, or not.Seems to me that a little adventure is one thing, but this is the start of alot more.Ifin hubby don't put his foot down to reclaim whats his.....well..... There's the next chapter I'd say..

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
Try reading without judging the characters

If you just read it as a story with characters and try to enjoy it for what it is, this is a great story. If it makes you feel superior to judge and criticize the narrator husband, get a life. I agree this has lot's of possibilities for expansion. I expect and hope we'll see more.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
Good One!

I loved this story!!! Very hot.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
Comments

I did not like the story, but I figure that's life. You like some ,you dislike others. The things I do find most irritating are the condescending comments from the arrogant readers who tpically tell the author to ignore all those idiots who didn't like the story, they liked it. as if their opinion was the only one of any value.

the Ct. Yankee

Romantic1Romantic1about 15 years ago
Top Notch Story

Keep writing. Well done.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
No matter how well written the story is

you can disguise the smell of wimp shit with all kind of perfume and it will still smell like wimp shit.Your husband is a wimp and the wife is a whore. I have known many photographers during my life and I never met a one that wasn't a horn dog with his own agenda. Do what ever you like but when it came to shaving off the wifes bush, which the husband appearantly liked, you crossed the line. I would have comited the most horrendous torture on the so called predator photog and his wife. They are intent on having her for their purposes and you make the husband a wimp that likes to jerk off his little drippy cock. you want to know what I thought and I just told you creep. If you don't like what I say then Email me and I'll give you some more shit. I wish that i could strike out through the computer and strangle you wimp husband cuckold writers..marriedwithballs@yahoo.com

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
wow

I found this story extremely hot. Trying to read at work and can't keep from rubbing myself.

My only problem is that I think any story that talks of pictures should include them.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
Figure that....

Judging from the comments here, seems to me one should read the "feedback" first before reading the story. That way you get a gist of what the story is all about, if not to your liking, ignore it, if it has possibilities, read it. Is this not an erotic literature site, with over thirty genres? Something for everybody. Now what's this about a bad story?

ryu77ryu77about 15 years ago
Nice but...

the husband is too accepting. Yeah, their sex life have improved, but that is because the wife now thinks about Mike while they are having sex. And if this keeps up, she will eventually stop having sex with the husband, but that's ok, she LOVES her husband right? "Hubby, from now on I will stop making love and just have sex with Mike. Sue and him are going to live in here with us and they will fuck me senseless every knight. Thak's ok right dear? Remember that I LOVE YOU SO MUCH!"

shangoshangoabout 15 years ago
You didn't warn me

So here's your zero. Write all the cuck crap you want but warn me before I have to read two pages of a guy wishing he could kiss another man's ass.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
WELL,WELL,WELL

If it isn't cocksucking slut wife loving ass hole loving WWW it of the little dick. You are a Tranvestite aren't you? WWW Just go fuck your self with your toys. You like these stories just as much as anybody else who like being a cuckold and a wimp. I am NOT marriedwithballs but I am married and I have balls. Unlike that twat WWW.

katibkatibabout 15 years ago
Concluded?

This story is well-written but not well ended--at least not to my satisfaction. A bit more of the husband's reaction would have been good. What kind of a man is he? You defy our common sense, I think, if you believe that he will go along with his wife's blatant betrayal.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
well

I just read your 2 stories and there is only one thing that is identical. the women in your stories have no modesty. the first story is even worse than this one so far. but even smooth words like in this story are not hiding the scheming. the story is well written and could have been very erotic but the fact that this is just another woman who is not telling the truth about what happend or is happening is spoiling the story. I don't know why so many think it that there is more erotic in lying and betrying than it would be honest marriage, which would be the base of a good marriage, friendship or partnership. the result of would be the same but in no case there would be a possible victim. I can't believe that a guy, even if he has nothing against it that his wife has more than him as a sexpartner would like to stop to have sex or that he likes to get an std of a unknown guy transmitted by his wife. it also amazes me, how easily again a woman has turned from a true wife to a sex crazed bitch who does not show any kind of feelings anymore. It also surprises me to see a guy who does not care at all. am I the only person who has a marriage where a lot more counts in life than sex alone? there seems to be nobody who wants anything from this couple. never a question from a relativ or a friend to do something on a weekend or a girlfriend of her asking: where did she go that weekend? everything is so narrowminded it's not enjoable. to sum it up, in a case like this I would by myself the most beautiful hooker and offer her: you can do your job from monday to friday 18.00 pm. you use always protection. this is your job. I work in my job from monday to friday. from friday 18.00 pm we have always an excellent weekend and with the money we make, we can do the most incredible things together.and we have 4-6 weeks holidays a year as we both have enough money. as long as it works out for you or me we can do this. if your not happy anymore I look for some other hooker who likes my idea. so here you have it, I have a companion who fucks a lot and other men or women but at least I know what she does and she does not have to go behind my back. and I have always a young and beautiful girl. nobody will be disappointed and sex with a pro might be even a lot more interesting. I had all I want even if I would be a voyeur I'm sure she could arrange it and she could tell a lot of tales of her with other guys. and the best I don't have to deal with stupid feelings like love or anything that could be hurt at all. thats about it what you tell in your stories so far, there is only a flat line. like zombies they still kind of live but not really.

gatorhermitgatorhermitabout 15 years ago
The Photo Album Ch. 02...

Beth decides that she loves Mike so she arranges for movers to take everything except her husband's clothes while he is at work. She cleans out the bank accounts and takes off. No note, nothing - she's gone. Sue decides that she's had enough of the cheating, so she empties Mike's bank accounts and leaves him with Beth. Mike starts looking for the next victim for he and Beth to seduce. Husband marries his secretary (who he's been banging for a year) and everybody lives happily ever after. The End.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
wantwhitewoman

your comments are simply sad and pathetic. This is LOVING WIVES, and the site is called LITEROTICA, so yes, many people read these stories and they don't like stories that have no EROTIC appeal, and have nothing to do with a loving wife. This story is about two dsiturbed people, and anyone who enjoys the wimp husband stories would never pass a standard personality profile... you can lie to yourself all you want, but your lives are obviously lacking seriously.

digdaddyrichdigdaddyrichabout 15 years ago
I feel sorry for the husband

He still loves her totally, and she wants another man's cock. How long will he be able to let her disrespect him by allowing another man have her body any way he wants. I think that she will probably leave her husband after he starts to complain that she is spending too much time with her so-called 'photo guy/lover' with the big cock. She let her husband down after she let the guy fuck her the second time. I could see the first time being coursity, but the second time was just plain cheating. Thanks for the good story....Rich

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
Is that idiot www still spewing his dog shit?

The story was pathetic & stupid - and that faggot www is still polluting the site with his dog shit presence - that is not good. MarriedwithBalls is one of few honest commentators out there who is not afraid to tell that asshole www where to go. High 100's for MarriedwithBalls.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
wantsie and warped one

With 2 stories under his wimpish cucked belt the writer has well stated his addiction. He has majored in the London School for Self Cucks and was awarded the Pink Apron, Pink Knee Pads, and Pink Fuzzy Slippers Statue for eagerness in his cock watching.<P>

His mum will be proud as he works toward his sex change operation.<P>

Writer you, like wantsie, are what you do and write. Well you would have to be a self cuck to spend all that one handed time and effort. <P>

A Pity matie that you waste your talent on the very few wantsie's of the cuckster world. .009% hardly warrants your sick absurd view of your sordid below human convention world where male humiliation is the drug you peddle.<P>

Kinda sad but somebody has to be you as nobody else would want to be so embarrassed and self disrespected while being turned on by your lack of humanity.

michael1950michael1950about 15 years ago
Some people

They read a story in loving wives section and are put off because the husband enjoys sharing his wife's sweet pussy, give me a break really. Perhaps mike could take some penatration photo's for her as well, that would really give hubby a woodie. Not bad man, not great but not bad, Maybe sue could join hubby so they all could have a go. Keep on writing ok, fun read, and for you critics, go ahead and vent, if this couple can work out there issues, so be it.

seacoastcoupleseacoastcoupleabout 15 years ago
Nice job!

Sexy story. I still don't understand why some people have such a strong reaction to these hotwife stories. If theu dislike them so much, why do they read them. I certainly don't read the incest stories, and frankly those deal often with things that are illegal in most states.

Keep posting and have fun!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
erotic

a very well presented story..really erotic.

oddonexoddonexabout 15 years ago
Power of Love

My good man, I have read the comments of some of the people. I find this story to be a spectacular example of the love of two people for one another. The wife asked for concurrence from the husband on all her actions. The husband acknowledges her love and devotion to him by letting her participate in an enjoyable activity. The wife's openness leads to trust. The wife does not act or speak in an humiliating way about her husband. The pleasure of both partners is the pinnacle of a loving relationship. The fact that this occurs in the open and not in secret shows of the love of these two people.

Keep up the good work.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
stop to idiots

ok thats enough with the cruel comments of the usual incest lovers who spell their poison to every loving wife we have on this site the story was great and we must have a second part coming soon dont be afraid of the snake tangues they are all arount us but we can get them . good work part two please!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
Some of you seem confused. You say she had her

husbands consent for her actions. Actually she did the actions then asked the husband if it was ok, there is a world of difference. Try this for size and see if it fits. My wife told me that today she spent every single cent we had to go out next week by herself, then she asked me if that was ok. Dont like that, try this. My wife told me today that a man had fucked her over and over and asked me if that was ok. I only have two choices yes it is ok and I can fuck her used cunt and whatever diseases she has acquired or no it is not ok and we divorce for her adultry. The word consent implies that one ask for permission before the act, and the permission is given fully and freely. Wonder in what part of this story anyone saw those actions!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
a shame they still let the anony www on the site

to spew his hatred. In one stories comments he said he wanted to fuck another guy, guess that really describes wwwbutcantgetany. This story sucks because the wife cares very little at all for her husband except as a paycheck to pay for her lifestyle, now perhaps she can "model" and pay for her own lifestyle as a whore.

KOLKOREKOLKOREabout 15 years ago
A dishonest cuckold

Nothing wrong with cuckold fantasies -if that's what you like... Only this one tried its best to hide its true identity: no hint in the name, the byline or the key words. I guess it's all about a dishonest cuckold...

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
What is with some people?

As one reader said. THE WIFE fucked both the woman and the man BEFORE telling the husband. SHE then went back and did it again. And she will continue sucking and fucking the couple and once she has tired that couple out she will then move on to another couple. Sex addicted sluts like her normally get paid for what she is doing. So the only possible way this story could go is the husband becomes the wifes pimp. He of course should stop having sex with the wife straight away, not that he's getting any anyway. But he won't be a man about it, HE gets off on the thought of her fucking and being fucked by someone else. I know their are many swingers on this site and their are many who have an 'open' marriage they of course will like this story. But most readers who have any sense of decency will not. So far I would guess that it's 60-40 in favour of those people who don't like this story. That won't be enough to put the writer off from his fetish, to my mind wanting to listen to your wife explain how she got fucked and loved it more than she ever did is a fetish, it's not sexy, it isn't a turn on and it certainly isn't erotic. Even as a fantasy this story doesn't work.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
Love it!

What a fun couple, and what a secure marriage they have. I hope you will write more about them.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
Well done

a well written erotic story......looking forward to more writing from you.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
bitch

she is wanton bitch. more than lickley he is a wimp! fuck you and them too!

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Intillegent Women

Stay away from you, thats why your single. Slut and a cockold, wow, thats different, puke.

ErotonautErotonautover 13 years ago
Very hot

Beth has been honest throughout this escapade, and taken each step with her husband's permission, so he can hardly complain now she's actually fucked Mike. Maybe he'll fuck Sue? Seems only fair.

DWornockDWornockalmost 13 years ago
Very well written.

I gave it a 3 and, although I have other issues that I will describe, I would have given it a 5 except for one thing. That is, "His cock is probably only an inch or so longer than you but I would guess about twice as wide if not more..." An inch longer is fine. However, twice as wide is impossible unless her husband had a micro-dick. Since micro-dicks are very rare and the result of hormonal problems, it is extremely unlikely that she would have married such an undesirable guy.

Almost certainly he would have been normal and if, even if the low side of normal, his dick would be 1.5" or more in diameter meaning Mike would have a dick 3" or more in diameter. No human has such a dick. Even 2" is very rare. 2" is too big to put in your mouth and is too big for any woman to put her hand and fingers completely around. A 2" diameter dick would appear huge and, if you Google, it is unlikely you can find a photo of a dick that large.

Since a 3" diameter dick is impossible. Therefore, I have no choice but to give the story a lower rating. If instead she had of said much thicker dick or that Mike's dick was so thick it was huge that would have been fine. The fact is that a dick 1/4" larger in diameter than average is huge and vary rare.

Although I would not have down graded my rating for the following, other problems I have are:

1. She starts by being timid and very proper lady and very quickly converts to being slutty. That does not happen. However, a little progressing in that direction would have been fine.

2. Her husband initially is shocked because Mike touched her pussy and he quickly goes from there to where he wants Mike to fuck and to continue to fuck her and to be pleased that Mike fucks her better. That makes him too wimpy for my taste and implies he is going to want her fucking other men, especially men with bigger dicks. Too many of such stories and I don't find them sexy. Much preferred is her getting fucked once or twice by Mike and not telling her husband about it. That would be normal and is what most women do. Women excel at sneaky sex because it is harmful to the relationship if their mate discovers that they cheated. In any event, if she loves her husband, she would not love sex with Mike more than sex with her husband and, even if she thought he was, she would not agree that Mike was better. After all she married her husband and highly unlikely she would have married him if sex with him was not good and exciting.

3. It doesn't set well that she refused sex with her husband so she would be fresh for the photos but turns around and has sex with Mike and his huge dick where she will not be fresh for the photos. Let alone, that it would have only been 1 fuck with her husband as opposed to many fucks with Mike and his bigger dick.

4. Shaving until she is bare, not just trimming. That was not necessary.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
sorry you wrote a story of a stupid slut and a more stupid husband

she has been more of a slut than he could possibly know from the photo album. She was stupid enough to give him photographic evidence of her stupidity and he didnt use it to divest himself such a stupid slut is almost impossible to imagine. I get tired of saying this cuck stories and lifestyles are fetishes and dont belong in LW they belong either in Fetish or Gay until Lit opens a Cuck section. Until then such stories are going to be ripped wide open except by those to whom this mental fetish is their own lifestyle. This isnt even a hotwife story its just a slut.trying to abuse and control her husband. I want to be honest but everything is after the fact no mutual consent. The"haters" make that people with normal taste will be deriled by the mentally challenged here, lol.

maxwell1985maxwell1985over 11 years ago
Don't bother to read Anonymous feedback

Anonymous feedback is not worth the 'paper' it's written on. 99% of them are just plain nasty. Are they half wits or do they have an agenda. This is an erotic story site. You should expect to have a varity of erotic stories contained within. If the story is not to your liking, move on and read another. comments should be costructive instead of nasty and be grown up enough to sign your comment. You are supposed to be over 18 anyway.

The story itself was well written but lacked a little something for me, Still it was a good read and would be worth a sequel.

execuwriterexecuwriterover 11 years ago
Enjoyed story very much

I am not a fan of this genre but Beth was so hot that I became aroused anyway.

cantbuymycantbuymyover 11 years ago

Thanks for the photographs you cheating fucking cunt - i am divorcing your whore Ass on grounds of adultery a d if he does not he is a fucking cuck.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
re : anonymous-great story

You lie.

Mustang88LXMustang88LXabout 11 years ago
Started out ok, but ended as Just another stupid loser husband

It started off hot with sexy photos of her but then turned into a Stupid Wimp Husband got played story. Sharing can be hot, but it is obvious that she has been cheating and has been Fucking the photographer now boyfriend from the start. But her hubby it shows, is a stupid loser, so you can't blame her for getting someone better and using the little faggot for convenience. It looks like she just had to break in the wimp faggot husband. She makes sure he is traveling when she starts training her wimp so he can never actually see it when she is with her BF. Hubby is so stupid he even gave her permission to spend a romantic weekend away with her boyfriend and all he gets is to jerk off, that equals Loser husband. Next he will be wearing her panties and sucking her BF's cock like the faggot he is. She isn't going to want her husbands cock anymore, as she already said her BF was the best Fuck ever. Pathetic! Husband should kill himself as he is worthless.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago

Just enjoy the story.its hot

OOAAOOAAover 10 years ago
EXCELLENT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Congratulations!!!!!!!!

Excellent story!!!

EgoTrixiEgoTrixiabout 10 years ago
Started off nicely...

...of all possible endings you chose to turn him into a loser.

guzzieathomeguzzieathomeabout 10 years ago
Well I liked this story, and could possibly provide you with the book you want.

Why do the detractors not realise that this is a story, why do they bother to read them? I like stories of this type.

At the end you say you would like to re-enact the photo album.

I could not offer that but if you respond to me directly,I could send you the digital version of a book featuring my wife.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
guzzieathome do you have any pictures of your wife

getting fucked like the slut she is and how much do you charge for a gangbang? I hope your wife charges by the minute, because that pussy will be mush in side of 20 mins.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
All Woman Fuck!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

It's true all woman fuck, you know.

She fucked you, and now your married. Great.

I have been a photographer for many years, and during those years, I photographed many woman.

Some where young and single, wanting a portfolio, to get into the modeling industry.

Others where in there 20's or 30's and married, they where all attractive.

Fact, all woman get aroused when they put on sexy clothes and lingerie.

Example, you bought your girl a sexy Valentine's Day night gown.

She modeled it for you, and you had wonderful sex that night.

The fact of the matter is that if she was modeling that same sexy sheer Baby Doll for a photographer, she would be even more turned on.

She would want sex. Want to be ravaged. Want to show you how sexy she is.

Wearing something so sexy in front of a "stranger" is more erotic.

Thus she is living out HER fantasy.

Another fact, when a woman puts on a sexy outfit for a man, she expects to be made love to. To be as naughty, and slutty as she can be.

To get the reaction she wants. A turned on guy, with a hard cock.

For only one reason. So he will fuck her brains out.

The photo session. Here comes your lovely wife, or sweet girlfriend.

Bringing with her an array of sexy dresses, swimwear, and matching bra's and panties. Not to mention her most sheer and revealing night gowns, and high heeled shoes.

Her hair is done up, nails all polished, lipstick red sexy, and shaved clean.

With butterflies in her stomach, she wants to be the best woman I've ever seen.

Let's begin with that sexy, black fuck me dress, you know the one.

Yeah a gentle pull and her tits fall out, or lift the hem and her pussy is right there.

With the high heels that bring her pussy and ass to just the right height.

No panties or bra in this number.

With a nice fresh drink of champagne in hand, she is ready to fuck.

By the time we start to take photographs she's primed.

I'd tell her to show off that cute back side, now that wonderful chest.

"May I touch you" I ask, looking at her tits. "Ah huh" she answers.

"Just to show how natural your breast are" I say, as I tweet her nipple's feeling each of her tits in my hands. "Mmmm that feels nice" she replies

Once I have her topless, it's time to get my hands on that pussy, finger in, and thumb on her clit.

"Wow! You have an amazing figure" I start again with her breast. "May I" as I touch her left nipple feeling her tit as her boyfriend would. "Ah huh, Ok"

That said, I suck her right nipple into mouth, still feeling her left tit , I slowly let me hand drift down to her pussy. Gently getting my finger wet from her own juices.

I slip it just in that wet pussy, and suck on her nipple until I hear her sigh.

What I do next depends on her, sometimes she will go for my hard cock, that she noticed during the shoot. Then start feeling me up.

If not I take my wet finger out of her cunt and either put it in her mouth or mine,

.

Choice hers, she will show me how she sucks cock on my finger.

Choice mine, I will suck my finger clean, then kiss her, placing her hand on my cock, as I return my hand to her pussy and clit.

Either way after I kiss her I go beck to her nipple then kiss my way down to her pussy.

Now I'm eating out your girl friend/wife and taking my cock out , if she hasn't already.

As I kiss my way up I decide to either enter her or best scenario, aim my cock for her mouth, which will always open. This is best as she wants to turn me on.

Her sucking on a stranger cock is so bad it's hot, and she will get so wet.

Believe it or not, your girlfriend/ wife will swallow my cum, even if she never has.

Then we kiss and get into position to fuck, and enter her unprotected, that's how they like it. If she asks me to pull out I say ok, in your mouth ok, If not I cum in her, she wants to be a little cunt, for me, and you.

So let her.

We never got to the swim wear, bra & panties, or lingerie.

It's not about the clothes. She just wants to be a woman.

There is no cuckhold, just cunt hold.

Enjoy

Rockyderek_caRockyderek_caover 9 years ago
Unfair

So is sue going fuck our hubby? Doesnt seem so. And no mention of her not cslling the entire weekend except upon her arrival? It was the best sex she ever had... Well so much for the home team ego.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago

He deserves to lose her, What a pussy

newtype2525newtype2525over 8 years ago
Amazing work!

Please ignore the hatred that seems flow here. Your story was incredible and amongst my favorite ever in the hot wives genre! I love the progression and the pacing! So many other stories rush to the finish, while yours was nourished to a delicious climax! I'm excited by the ending and although many years have passed, I shall hope on that this story had not seen it's definite end. Thank you again and please find yourself in writing form soon!

Cheers

eddie52xeddie52xover 8 years ago
Fantasic Story!

I have read the story twice, so enjoyed. Great writing. Please continue the adventure of all four characters.

newtype2525newtype2525over 8 years ago
I love re-reading this!

Please write more soon!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
cheating

i liked it untill u had the photgrapher come on her. and then the stupid holiday swimsuit vacation shoot the husband is a wimp. the photos were for hom in the begginning yes? maybe have a threesome with the husband and photographer but this o i fuck the photographer without hubby is shot and really a bigger dick. ever hear of all the other stories on this site? just recycles garbage on that one

RaiderangelRaiderangelabout 7 years ago
Desire

Excellent story. I loved how the wife described each and every trist. Very erotic and exciting.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
Bad and sad atory well written

Since the essence of the story i cuckold - a total degradation of the marrige - there should have been a warning at first.

The wife in this story is nothing but a slut, and the story i crying for an other tail.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
Excellent story!

It's an erotic tale of two people in love who cross the boundary of monogamy, with both agreeing to do it and enjoying the outcome. Not surprising that the hateful comments from those with Lit accounts come from persons who have not written stories or, if they have, do not allow voting. Use your delete key to take out the trashy personal insults and negative comments having nothing to do with a literary critique. Keep writing.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Pathetic!

Just another sissy loser husband and a wife who clearly prefers Mike and Sue. She will end up leaving her sissy wimp husband and move in with the 2 she really wants while telling her sissy that it will be better for their marriage and she still loves him but that she is In love with Mike. Totally pathetic. No one to like in this mess.

kiteareskitearesalmost 6 years ago
Mediore story

and too many clichés - especially the beach shoot had to be at an adult resort and mike had to have a bigger cock, twice as wide? really? and the loving wife just had to have it....

The escalation felt wrong, 2 meetings then to the beach for the weekend. It also felt sad that Beth laughed at the husband's question if felt like she was laughing in her husband's face as if to say, 'you pathetic man, Mike's a real man'.

You might want to use the last 3 tags to indicate all the detailed sex is with someone other than the husband.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
One Cliché After Another

This could have been written by a 13-year-old.

26thNC26thNCalmost 5 years ago
Pictures

According to LW, if your wife has.photos made, she is going to turn into a raging whore. This story has been written fifty times before, and always better.

BeauReadyBeauReadyover 3 years ago
Just Plain Wrong

What the photographer and his wife did is usually referred to in the courts as a breach of trust and aggravated sexual assault/rape - both criminal and civil offences. They could face up to 20 years in prison and be subject to suit for damages by the wife and husband in the tens of thousands, facing ruin and bankruptcy.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
BeauReady is a Dick

BeauReady is a Dick. A complete Jerk. It's a story asshole.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Just more

cuck fodder

IntrepidMeIntrepidMeabout 2 years ago

This STORY is awesome

Exactly what I would love my wife to do

Thanks for writing it so well

robzigrobzigover 1 year ago

This was one of the best l have read in this category. You need to ignore what some numpties have posted . They would not be able to write anything better . Thanks and keep providing the fap material.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

On HOT story. Great writing. Thank you.

Ed

AnonymousAnonymous10 months ago

"You still love me, don't you?"..."Yes, deeply."...Really? Did he believed her? How stupid could he be?

AnonymousAnonymous7 months ago

I liked the part about how her pussy looked after the photographer fucked her. My wife's cunt is at its most beautiful just after she's been fucked.

maddictmaddict4 months ago

I hoped this was a second part to the audition it does very well on its own. Do you think Sue and her husband have done this before, I think many times before. The revealing ending for the husbands questions is just smoking hot. The just phught look of a pussy, but not by you is a image I won't soon forget

ryeandginger69ryeandginger693 months ago

As a husband of a hotwife who loved her to cum home from being fucked and tell me the hole story as we feverishly re-enacted her ravishment, I really enjoyed your story from the husband's point of view. That view he had of her heavily-used pussy really hit home.

Very well written it was, too.

AnonymousAnonymous3 months ago

I loved this story , loved the hot wife exposing her pussy to strangers had me rock hard , this has always been my fantasy to have my little petite wife photographed just like Beth , but haven't talked her into it yet , or found a nice male photographer , hopefully one day .

irinmikeirinmike21 days ago

Nice start, absurd ending. Typical husband, just let your wife head off with a photographer to fuck and suck him for the weekend. Oh and lets not forget, wife informs husband that she intends to continue fucking her favorite photographer well into the future. Give me a break!

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