All Comments on 'The Photo Shoot'

ended before it started

Very sad

after a cumming out fetish, TK U MLJ LV NV

Who is THAT stupid? Marriage over.

1 star

You might want to read some stories on here and use them as a template, this was terrible

What did being married have to do with this plot? She fucked the photographer before her marriage, and she's fucking her again as she's carrying their child. If the husband is that clueless and base, he deserves having a slut for a wife.

It's amazing how many sad pathetic little men come on here and whine and cry over every single story they don't agree with the subject matter. Getting your poor little feelings hurt by a fictional story on a porn site shows just how utterly pathetic you really are.

I don't understand the complaints. Fucking is mental as well as physical and the mental images conveyed are terrific. The anon psychobabble is hilarious. Its a story, only a story, regardless of any remarks. Either you like the genre or you don't. 4 stars.

Write more.

A totally new concept for LW. Who would ever think of cheating with the photographer?

All LW photography stories suck.

For only three characters it was surprisingly difficult to follow along