All Comments on 'The Pilots Ch. 01'

You're telling a wonderful story full of love, passion, raw sex and emotions of two people of different generations who are trying to find themselves out of loneliness. This is a great start and I can't wait to see the next chapter.

This submission hit many cords with me. I await part two eagerly.

I really enjoyed this story although the whole idea of them saying they loved each other so quickly was a little out of place. The sex scenes were hot and I'm excited to read the next chapter.

Great story! About to start Part 2. BTW, Kim is geographically challenged. Lincoln Center is in New York. The Watergate Hotel (now closed for remodeling) is in DC, around the corner from the Kennedy Center.

Love the concept and romance. You need to tell less and show more.