All Comments on 'The Platform Dive'

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warm4warm4over 1 year ago

Great start. looking forward to megan joining in…

Cyberweasel89Cyberweasel89over 1 year ago

"Perfectly proportioned breasts" is pretty vague when we don't know her proportions or what you think of as "proportionate." We're not mind-readers...

LenardSpencerLenardSpencerover 1 year ago

Yes, I know these stories are just fantasy BUT... If a University was going to receive $10 million from a rich donor if Carly dived naked, then she could request a lump sum payment of at least $100,000. Perhaps $200k? If the donation is dependent on her participation she has major barguning power. The University wouldn't even put the boyfriend on the payroll. "Perhaps a few hours per week" they said. So, get real.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

I think many others like me are curious as to which adventures the two (or 3) has later in their lives.

Poacher11Poacher11over 1 year ago

Another good opening chapter. Looking forward to the next instalment

wilson711wilson711over 1 year ago

Tremendous, fun & highly entertaining story!!!!! Hopefully we will see part 2 in the near future. Peter gets a job at the local university & continues his education? additional public nude events? other characters getting involved in the nudist lifestyle?

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Truly a Sweet story! Enjoyed, as I always do with your stories. Hope there will be further adventures with Carly and Peter! drmike

CZOFTWCZOFTWover 1 year ago

Feels unfinished

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Love this story, great just like all your stories. perfect nude fun. Please give us more on this one. What will happen when they mingle. Will Megan join them in the nude. The excitement is great,

warm4warm4over 1 year ago

Looking forward to more of those memorable scenes from behind the starting blocks…

lc69hunterlc69hunterover 1 year ago

beautiful nude fun

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

This looks like the start of a beautiful friendship.

N4kedmodelN4kedmodelover 1 year ago

Still waiting for Part 2 which, I am sure, will be great as always, to continue with that public nudity and all!

warm4warm422 days ago

Hopefully a part 2...

SundownerHHSundownerHH19 days ago

A really good piece!

The authors avoid to mention the status of Peter‘s dick for a long long time. That adds to the tension.

The end is too short. What now?

But the end is romantic ;-) Therefore, the reader can forgive you. Thanks for the exiting hour of my reading.

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