All Comments on 'The Private Game Ch. 04'

Cucks r really gays wh0 dare not come out there freak of nature an the women r self centred whores

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Can't wait to read what you think of next!

Cuckold helping wife suck Chucks huge cock, licking his balls. Have cuckold under wife as she is fucked doggie. Then right after Chuck blows his load in her, he can clean chucks cock and she can sit on his face. More humiliation for cuckold.

...each and every wimpy cuck congratulates on a "story well done"...but not one of those brainers is man enough to sign other than "Anonymous". Men without balls..quod erat demonstrandum..lol

He has just witnessed his wife fucking another man. Exposing herself to all manner of diseases. Why would he expose himself to any disease? Why wouldn't he tell her that he was going home. And that when she got there he would help her pack her things and leave since they were getting a divorce? This isn't a hot wife. This is a whore. Men don't stay married to whores. And this story was just disgusting. The ending, especially, made no sense. Poorly written and badly conceived. Even the sex scenes were boring. No stars.

I enjoy the mood of your stories. It's fun, it has a light and easy movement... great work.

I realize the annon posters are borderline retarded and I should stop being amazed by them... but I'm still amazed by them. Why do these people continue reading stories about themes that offend them and then feel the need to comment on said stories... demonstrating that they don't understand it's fiction?

I don't know... it just boggles the mind and I can't help but be continually shocked by the level of stupidity.

Author, you are doing a great job :D

Was she dumb or easy or both? It was a good easy to read story and it got a five from me.

Since it was all set up by Chuck I know when they talk it will end in divorce. Too bad someone doesnt write that one.

Another 5***** series. Lynn is a sexy hot wife. I would love a wife just like her.

You are better than the average wanna be writers on here and you have a good story line. I would recommend slowing it down a little and getting a deeper perspective from the female. You will attract more female readers if you can tap in to what a woman would feel if she were a bit reluctant. That feeling of wanting and being scared of wanting too much, or being a slut and when to cross that line, is used by great writers to draw out the anticipation and keep all readers riveted. An orgasm is the end. Foreplay is what makes for the best sex. Keep at it and thanks!

Some of the most emotionless writing I've ever seen. It's clinical, not erotic.

I always wondered why some people read a story and then criticize it. It seems like they would stop reading if they didn’t like it. They should!

So So So Hot! Now if this was me, I would send the wife into Chuck's Room for another fuck. I would instruct the wife to leave the door almost closed, but not all the way so I could tiptoe down to secretly watch my wife getting fucked. Another 10 Big Blazing Stars for Hot Hot Story. Thanks. Buster2U

How about a series on Chuck, his brother and Susan ?