All Comments on 'The Renovation of Maria Ch. 03'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Oh

I wish this story line would continue. How about it?

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
pretty good, needs more work like at least 10 more chapters, at least!

I am attracted to 40 something year old inhibited women that overcome their inhibitions and give in to their craving, reluctantly or ravenously, take your pick, to have their here-to-fore secret masochistic longings fulfilled in spades. Give in many, many times with loud screams of pain and euphoria. You have opened 4 distinct trails, Betty, Maria, Maria's friend, and the eubicquitious (where-the-hell's spellchecker wheh you need it) widow. Please blaze them through to a masterful conclusion. I need a vicarious bdsm fix, and yours was real good, though it did skip over some really good parts toward the last.

DHL

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
Hoping for more

This series deserves to be continued........

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago

This chapter is begging for a fourth chapter.

jenellesljenelleslover 5 years ago
Classy

These are some very classy stories. Thank you. Well crafted and no noticeable errors in grammar or spelling. Lovely

SubmissiveCelesteSubmissiveCelesteover 2 years ago

Love it. It could have been written by my Dom. about us. The writing was good and the story was great. Thank you for a good feeling Bdsm story.

appyBappyBover 2 years ago

Excellent. Thank you.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

He’s kind of greedy isn’t he? Wants to break in all the new subs, why not just use an NDA? Video is a very risky business evidence can always be leaked, lost or stolen. On top of that is it just him and Betty funding the entire thing? If there’s an entry fee/ subscription then he could arguably be arrested for running a brothel/ similar. It did make me wonder what the entry procedure is for Doms/ Dommes?

Tess (uk)

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