by 12oclocktales
Beautiful writing to compliment a loving and deeply erotic act that thoughtfully details the tender and equal sharing too often avoided in most other stories. I can't be wait to read Chapter 2 and future similar themed stories.
I read it because I was curious, but it was very difficult to read... Written well, but the stink of shit was overwhelming!!! The football star and pretty blonde helped, but I just can't find any sexual turn-on with shit!!
Wildly sexy but soooo medically irresponsible as to endanger anyone reading it. Surely the author realizes the terrible ramifications of going from ass to pussy with feces involved.
Very nasty and dark but you failed to at least have the couple wash the shit off his dick before he fucked her pussy. I know we get lost in the scene but failing to work in some basic hygiene is negligence. Pussy to ass yes. Ass to pussy without cleaning, dangerous as hell. Sorry for the break in the fantasy but I don’t want any wonderfully nasty couples to get sick as hell from infection.
Thank you all for your comments. Just a word on the risks some say I’m ignoring: I’m well aware of the hazards of dirty ATM and ATP, but, rightly or wrongly, assumed my readers were equally aware and, like me, were more interested in the fantasy unfolding than the medical dos and don’ts. All my scat stories (I hope you will give them a look-see) make this assumption, and I thought as stories allow readers to put real-life concerns on the back shelf for a while and enjoy the fantasy. I’m not an advocate for the practices my characters indulge in, just an observer. Enjoy.