All Comments on 'The Second Generation Ch. 02 - Finale'

Compared to many of your stories this one seems incomplete. There are a lot of questions about the mystery of Yvonne, and about the cryptic remark from Rose. Nice story, but begs for one or more chapters for closure.

You should keep going with this one

This is so unusual. HStoner stories always get tied up nice and neat, Not so this one.

If Yvonne wasn't the daughter of Annie, then was she a maid, companion or something else. Is there more to come out there?

It seems like Cassie and Harry are working out well enough and maybe they do get the vineyard aspects sorted out that they make a real go of it. Then get Cassie's friends in as additional labour perhaps. Harry and several naked women working the place.

Like another commentator, it feels unfinished yet.

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You really need to do a denouement, or at least give your readers an explanation as to why there is none.

Leave ‘em with an air of mystery.

Romantic, delightful, lots of imagination.