All Comments on 'The Shrinking Machine Ch. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
Great story

Please write a second chapter

Writer345Writer345almost 9 years ago

I'm interested to see how this story pans out... I hope that there will be more chapters.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
Why..

Why take her that small. She's of no use like that. Should have left her in the obedient Sex slave state.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
Size trouble

I'm having slight trouble imagining the size. Is she Barbie doll sized or Polly pocket sized?

calumnyandliescalumnyandliesabout 1 year ago

second time reading this story, still crazy good! Both the protagonist's sadistic desires and the fear of her little experiments are very satisfyingly written.

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