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AG31AG318 months ago

I assume this isn't the place for editing type critiques, typos, etc., since the story is already published. But let me know if you'd like such info for future versions. The content isn't my thing, so I won't give that sort of feedback, but I do endorse authors helping each other out.

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I live in Washington state. Aspiring writer, mostly a hobby now. I like off beat humor, weird things, sci-fi, fantasy, horror. Mostly inspired by B-movies, Roger Corman, old school pin-up girls, and Greek and Renaissance sculpture and art.