All Comments on 'The Slaving World Pt. 02'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Good series, good read

I like the series, the balance of story and the sex scenes. That the story seems more realistic adds to its credibility, keeping writing please, this has lots of potential.

Cindy1001Cindy1001over 7 years ago
Wonderful!

"A tear rolled down her face as she listened to the familiar sounds of the forest: the birds, the wind in the trees, the babbling of the creek; and realized that she regretted losing those more than losing her freedom."

I cried too, reading this beautiful sentence. And a beautiful story. Very interested in the continuation.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Roy and Elaine

Will they meet again one day?

beygaze1beygaze1over 7 years agoAuthor
re: Roy and Elaine

Short answer, even I don't know yet. We'll have to see where the story goes... Look for more Roy in upcoming parts.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago

I would like this to have a few more parts. As I would like Lida to obtain her revenge on her husband!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
Write more!!!

Love the characters love the stories can't wait for more. Thank you for writing!

nthusiasticnthusiasticover 5 years ago
Makes Him Pay

Sure hope someone makes him pay for his actions, the cesspool scum! My apologies to all cesspools.

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The Adventures of Emmy share a world with the rest of my stories. but it is not necessary to have read any others to understand them. If you are new to Elaine, the order of the stories is: 1-When Elaine Met Amanda 2-Elaine at the Party (a prequel) 3-Taking Elaine (the traditi...

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