by FifthEstate
Your long tangents of dick obsession are unentertaining to me, but your gay fans probably love it.
I guess that the horny wife won’t be able to stop after having the boy once. She’ll get fucked constantly and her sissy husband will be relegated to clean up duty. Haha.
Great second chapter! You are building it up nicely with flashbacks of previous incidents explaining how we got here.Personally what I would like to see in the next chapter is-Nick's point of view.How he thought of Abbie and how he planned to seduce her...Keep going please.
I really love this premise and as usual you are spinning it in a creative and HOT way! Already can’t wait for ch 3...
I just finished reading the first 2 chapters of "The Speedo Doesn't lie"...
Great start... very well-written.... I'm waiting anxiously for a few more installments..!! I kw it'll only get Hotter and hotter... Keep up the good work...
JIM
Thanks for getting my weekend off to a great start! Nothing like getting an early morning nut dreaming about that hot slut! Great work again!!!!!
GREAT FOLLOW-UP TO THE FIRST ONE! HOPE SHE FUCKS HER BULL WITH HUBBY SITTING NEARBY IN A CHASTITY TUBE
All your stories make me so wet. Wish it was me getting titty-fucked by that BBC. Please release the next story soon, I can't wait!
I can't wait to see where you go from here...I want to hear how that bull fucked her brains out. I hope you make this as long as that UCLA story. Soon please!
One big spurt for each of the 5 stars I gave it. You rock Fifth!
Damn...I liked this one even better than the last. Your interracial stuff is some of the best on the website. Always a good story with the smut! Loved it!
I love the way you tell your stories with thoughts coming from each of the characters and you always insert some funny parts. I find myself laughing between with the lights off and my pants around my ankles. I hope the husband gets to watch and participate at some point
Would love to see you introduce the humiliation aspect into this story too. Both Nick and Abbie telling Justin just how much bigger and better Nick is as Justin watches from the sideline as Nick destroys Abbie's pussy.
This was such a great story. I hope it inspires you to write more similar stories in the future.
Seems like Justin wants to suck the black dick also? A little jealous of his wife? Why not let him try? Please🥰
Keep it going. You’re making me wet, horny so wanting that BBC xoxoxoxo Annette ♠️♠️♠️💋
I like that you have developed a story line with this hot story. Also hope that you develop the three main characters while incorporating their friends, with future chapters. Look forward to reading more about Abbie, Justin and Nick's adventures into their new lifestyle.
Thank You!
I agree with Comment about Justin also! I think a hot twist would be to have the coach come to grips with his bi sexual desires, the story is superb but why not open it up to readers who enjoy the cucks Bi for the irresistible bbc? I hope so thanks
Great start! Looking forward to many more chapters. So many twists to explore.
I read both stories and feel like you might be setting up a Chuck or a Chuck bi story, Justin is awful curious about Nicks monster dick? I hope so
Nice follow up, I like how your fleshing this story out, looking forward to more
I think Abbie will be filmed taking BBC for many to see based on comments made here or maybe she gets filmed so hubby can watch it over and over. Can’t wait to see this story progress.
The first chapter was an amazing set up and I eagerly read this one. You have the perfect amount of build up and anticipation in this story, with the right amount of sexual descriptions, not too much or to little. It's also amazing how we know what each one is thinking in whatever scene they are in. =)
I do not normally like stories or films that start at a point in time then jump back in time to explain how we arrived there but there exceptions and this is one, where in my opinion it works well.
Great writing FifthEstate, Thank you for taking the time to write.
Like the story but the inappropriate use of adverbs is distracting.... "suddenly" .... Suddenly he heard the toilet flush?.. wait what?... his wife walked past him....he heard her use the bathroom ... and the flushing of the toilet was surprising and unexptected? .... "quickly" he heard...what? You don't hear quickly... quickly refers to an action... like walking, jumping... etc... or doing something without delay. I walked quickly across the room.... i heard the offer and quickly accepted.
Ab is really thinking hard about Nick’s big black snake and what it would feel like in her
I just finished reading chapters one and two and I'm so wet and turned on. Time for a shower! I'll get to the other chapters soon! Can't wait to see how this all plays out! Hope you keep writing cause you're an inspiration!
Can’t wait to read the next chapter! Abbie is going to be the hottest black cock slut!