All Comments on 'The Swap-Club'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Superb

An excellent story!Good and slow build-up.Some editing is required.Feet have toes not fingers.Instead of pricey cunt,you could have used some other word like luxury cunt.A good attempt nevertheless.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Good Erotic Story

Good Erotic Story : A lot of excellent Word Imagery. But the Scope was Limited. Therefore another Encounter between the same four in another Setting with prolonged Fore-Play and other things left to Authors Immagination.

shang40shang40over 7 years ago
addiction to watch

My best friend Parag once fucked my wife in front of me and they made me addicted to see them making love..

And a day came when I was on bed and he took her in doggie style right above my face. The sight was mesmerizing

sanjuagarwal2068sanjuagarwal2068almost 4 years ago
Nice

Nice story keep on writing

junamjunamover 3 years ago

Story flow is awesome. Wishing the couples keep playing and there are more such stuff to read.

PragyanparamitaPragyanparamitaalmost 3 years ago

Nice explained erotic story..I feel wet while concluding the story.

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