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AlbedoGrimoirealmost 4 years agoAmazing!!!
Great start to this story I looking forward to reading more!!!
Anonymousalmost 4 years agoFormatting
It's a good start, but it would be much more clear if you separated the paragraphs when you change speakers. And you'll need some more punctuation, like commas, at the end of their quotes. Keep up the good work.
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