All Comments on 'The Thong'

This story has such a good flow and builds the excitement as well as the interest as it developes. Looking forward to reading some of your other works. Thanks. Hope there are more in the future.

Great story and real men behave like this

The best that I've ever read on this site! You tell a beautiful story with complete characters and intimate,sweet,eloquent sex. I would love to meet this man.

I have been reading stories from this site for three years, and this is the very best entry. It has a life all it's own. I hope to read more submissions from old hippie soon.

This story has it ALL! You could have sold it to PLAYBOY. It will be very hard for me in the future to give a top grade to any story that does not meet the high standard you have set. BRAVO!

Your actions and thoughts throughout your story are so much like mine that I could have written it. I was taught to make "LOVE",not just have sex by an older French woman when I was 22. Now past 70, believe it or not, I'm still using the same techniques and attitudes toward my younger partners and I have three steadies that really appreciate the approach that you and I advocate, and none are over 40.

The only thing that I don't use are drugs of any kind, unless you wish to call a good wine or Champagne a drug. The closeness and erotic contact with my partners are heady enough.

Great details, great story telling, steamy sex, tender moments. One of the best stories I ever read here.Congrats

I have read all of your stories and love them all. I am not a profesional critic , but you are , or are among the best ! Thank You for my pleasure.

one of the few really good love stories. age wasn't even an issue until the end...and i cried. beautifully written.

Wonderful characters. Erotic and sensual. Quick paced and romantic to boot. Leaves the reader dripping! *S*

Superb writing style, the basics well covered, story line and characters were well defined. Very enjoyable to read and will "force" me to check out all of your work. Many writers could learn from your efforts in some fashion.

Keep 'em coming!

What a lovely, erotic, well-written story. Beautifully done.

Started out happy, wound up bittersweet and melancholy. Even sad. Much like real life.

Loved this

Really admire your style - steering clear of hackneyed "porno language"; clear of "sex as domination". Makes the eroticism more real, believable and, well, truly erotic.