All Comments on 'The Twelve Zenati Pt. 09'

I have read all of your stories!!! And omg I am so in love with this one so far!!! I didn’t think you could match Peri, then we had Kat, and now we have so many more amazing women!!! I am seriously a stalker level fan!!! Lol

Surprise wedding. What a wonderful idea. Can’t wait for the next chapter. Thanks.

Five is not enough. I was thrown off base for a bit, but weren't we and they all? A marvelous chapter. Thank you.

What a wonderful way to get Vivienne and Gideon married. I agree that this needs more than 5 stars. Great story so beautifully told.

this is Ellie. You are an awesomely talented writer!

Noted the Watchman in attendance. Did he stay, or did he go back?

Jules

Yay! Finally Gideon and Viv and a perfect wedding and first time! Loved it and continuing to love these brothers. Come on Noah and Marcie!

You outdid yourself with this chapter. Love, laughter, romance, and a picturesque honeymoon spot what a way to start off marriage and build a life together.

In an earlier comment, I expressed my slight disappointment that you were not focused more exclusively on Olivia and Genesis; however, I could not have been more wrong. You have made a believer of me. Your tale of the three love-cursed Zenati men and their curse-breakers is nothing short of delightful.

I do have one concern: When I began reading the two previous Twelve Tables stories, they were complete. Now, I am trying to pace myself...and trying to prepare myself for the rapidly approaching time when I will have to patiently wait for new installments. For now, I will continue to enjoy reading consecutive chapters filled with all of your funny, infuriating, and sensuous twists and turns. Thank you so much for sharing your wonderful gift.

Olivia's sister is giving me VERY bad vibes. At this point, I don't trust (or like) her... and I'm sorta hoping that she doesn't turn out to be Noah's curse-breaker. Of course, that could change if she shows a convincingly nice side.