All Comments on 'The Ultimate Playboy Pt. 01'

Premise a little weak - but the sex was awesome - had me cumming all over myself

Really GOOD! I will be reading Part 2 right away.

Thanks.

I really liked your story and continue to write the story to a conclusion. Too many writers just trail off and it really bothers me. I hope you finish this very interesting story.

This is a tender, sensitive story and a great stoke tale. I love it. It is nuts and it is true in some ways.

Well done!

Nookiehunter

...not a lot's changed in 3 1/2 years...

it's still a great read.

This is a super well written story. The sex seemed to develop naturally and logically, the attraction absolutely simmered. Can't wait to read more.

I like how you brought the high school teacher back,didn't see that coming! Also liked the foursome in the dorm room! Great story!

Loved it !!!

Just geeky enough to be fun and, although some of the seed is covered too quickly, pretty hot when you take your time with it.