All Comments on 'The Un-Official First Night'

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Fantastic job. Short, simple and very erotic!

Terrible. Did you enter a contest to see how many times you could write 'penis' in one paragraph? I counted six time in one of them. Funny you decided the male organ was clinically described as a penis, but her good bits are referred to as a cunt: the most disrespectful term. The writing was preteen in quality and depth. You get 2*, only because I don't give one star to anyone who has taken the time to post.