All Comments on 'The Unattainable Man'

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mojorisin1967mojorisin1967over 9 years ago
Great start. Thank you.

We can't wait for further adventures of the unnamed lady. Luckier ones, we would like to wish for her sake.

unsure54unsure54over 9 years ago
One must wonder

May this have been a true experience you needed to get off your chest? It is a good start whether it is or not. Look forward to "the continuing adventures..."

lovessaltedcaramellovessaltedcaramelover 9 years agoAuthor
Thanks for the comments....

This story is fiction, though loosely based on a fantasy version of a crush I had. ;)

gotranegotraneover 8 years ago
Just Enough!

You gave us just enough of this story to make us want more! The mark of a true author. In your world, there has to be someone else that reminds you of them, and brings them back to you. For, you've went just far enough with them, to want to go a little further with someone else. Please continue to do so.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Hoped for more dominant woman...

Maybe another story you will take a lover who is slightly shorter and use him for a short and intense tryst.

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