All Comments on 'The Unattainable Shelly'

that has to be one frustrated guy!

Actually kind of funny if you step back and look at it!

Nice job.

That is my total comment

This story is a slight departure from your normal offering. It is also better than your normal offering.

A good read and a nice premise. LIked this story. Keep it up.

WSell written and a funny story. I enjoy it

Fun story. Well written as usual. Could have been in humor and satire as well, but I understand your putting in "LW". I always seem to like your writtings. JimDinMN

Nice funny one. Really got me laughing instead of horny. Real nice, still can't get over the ironic.

Awful story! There is no realistic basis for any truth in this fantasy. If you need to know how to write a decent story, look up mine that are authored under Dr.T on Kristen Archives.com or Preggoman.com

This guy will do anything to fuck a gangbang slut. Why, so he can share in the diseases she carries around and spreads to others? The maturity level here is about 13!

Too stupid so I gave it a 1

when she comes back in 6 or 8 months, he tracks her down, BUT....

She is out of the gangbang business now for good, because on the last visit she came down with HIV. Seems not-so-dumb jock hubby always insisted on getting her tested after her gangbangs before marital sex would resume. Anyway, she guesses she got it on the last trip, and that fire alarm saved his life-LITERALLY!

And the only reason she is back in town is to let the other gangbangers know. Since her family disowned her and her marriage is over, she's moving out to california where she can get some progessive treatment for the aids, and some medical marijuana to help with the symptoms until the end comes.

Sometimes "bad luck" is the best luck of all, eh?

You got to be kidding. Call this erotic? My ass.

FUNNY, really funny and I'm glad you have a sense of humor.

Tiny Tim

Mildly funny, but just over the top stupid.

for a good story your effort and to offset the asshole of LIT's vote of !

Set up too stupid to deserve my time.

Credentialled author can do much better than this crap!

2*

and maybe its for the better, TK U MLJ LV NV

...she is probably a human petrie dish of every sexually transmitted disease known to man. Thanx!

Loklie

Do they, Bob? Thanks for the laugh.

This was very different, and not really in a good way. Nasty might cover it.

write about a whore with ease

I expected more torment for poor Ray. I was expecting multiple chances where his turn was skipped, and some conspiracy to keep him out of her pussy. This wasn't bad, but I just was hoping for more.

you fucking idiot, when she said 8pm why werent you there by 7 waiting at the door?

You just wrote my life!!

DD