All Comments on 'The Video'

Not a lot of sex but I enjoyed it just the same. Good work.

Nice story, I enjoyed it. But why is it in Incest? No incest, Erotic I think would be more fitting. But then, whatever.

Loved it. Excellent. hope there is more coverage of the informal gatherings.

Did I miss the incest part?

Not truly incest, but a good story anyway

What was taboo about this?

Nice and enjoyable as usual from you Stoner. But like others said where was the incest? You've had more in some of your EV stories, where this one should really be. I'd have still read it there and marked it the same, but you'd probably have got more views there.

Thanks all the same.

This is begging for additional chapters

It's been a while since we were blessed with another hstoner story, but this one ranks up there with your best...it was worth waiting for. I agree with the comment that this story has much more to come (pun intended *s*). I look forward to a continuation of this story, potentially even including the Incest that was advertised.

Nice story, but now that you have them on the edge. You need them to take the plunge with each other.

Hot! Very hot! Imagine a video of a night like that.

The flow of words are stilted, like a rough white water event. HStoner, a rewrite, paying attention to thought flow would greatly help.

Would love to read the nest chapter.