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All Comments on 'There Goes the Neighborhood Ch. 05'

by MarshalMarmont1815

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AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Yeah

I just read the entire story (up to this chapter). It jumped around some, but was a good story overall. I look forward to reading more of your stories. Thanks for your time and efforts.

goducks1goducks1over 5 years ago
good story overall

i agree with the earlier comment - the story jumps around - not always sure of the storyline - but its very sexy and a fun fantasy. very enjoyable reading

PrinzmettlePrinzmettleover 5 years ago
Hot story; terrible text

I loved the story. Hot sex kept me aroused, but. You leave out words; you use the wrong words. Continuity is fair. Writing is sloppy. It is a prime example of "written but not read" and it infuriates me. It could be so much better if you actually read it over. Or, if you did, you had someone else copy-read it and fix the stupid mistakes.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Lol, 18 loads. How absurd

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I have always loved making stories and I love fucking. I must say I get a lot of emails and comments regarding the timeline of my stories. But I must say, there really isn’t one. Once you get past Motherly Love, then there is the There Goes the Neighborhood neighborhood seri...