by writerotica
Keep it up especially under the premise of mother and son doing it right under the fathers nose or almost being caught. Loved it!
She's been married 16 years which makes him 15 at most. She's offering him drinks as if adult, 21 in most states. He's not going to be fully grown, father's physique at 14-15 yo. You need to know the logical consequences of all the facts you put into a story.
Glad to see this was well received and appreciate your acknowledgement, even though I made only a few minor suggestions. Keep writing.
She can tell the drunken jerk he fathered the child, even though she and her lover-son know better!
I loved this story. Keep up the good work and write some more. I can't wait for your next story.
Well done! One of the best I have read so far! More of Jason and his mom maybe! Keep it up..
This was very good. You should have him get the father so drunk that he does his mom in the bed right next to his son of a bitch father.
Fantastic story, one I'll re-read. Very well written. I look forward to a follow up, or similar.You do have one lined up I hope?
That was an INCREDIBLE story!. I cannot wait for the sequel(s) to this!. I would wait on the whole pregnancy bit though. Awesome!!!
i think that you have a future in writing and would like to read more. keep up the good work and in your next one you can have that your mom gets pregnat ass that would really top it off. by for now.
I also recommend the pregnancy of mom and her lactating breasts. mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm. Oops, I'm drooling
The setup for this story made it good... the sex part was a bit too cliche mon-son taboo for my tastes however. Overall, I liked it though.
Very believable story. Had me at attention the whole time. Wish that instead of her shadow, that we got to see the real her. But my imagination was fun to explore too. Hope this story continues. I wouldn't want her to get PG. It would spoil having sex with her all the time and if I was him...it would be ALL the time. THANKS
Fantastic! I really appreciated the little twist at the end! Most Excellent
Didn't the kid figure his mom wouldn't know her husbands cock from someone elses? Or in just the way he shagged? Plan B? He's just incredibly lucky, is all. Mom is no fool. She was probably planning her seduction long before...
There is nothing like a sexy mother. I had one and I had many a hard-on as a result. I never fucked her, but I dreamed about her often. If my father had not been such a terrific man, I probably would have at least tried to fuck her.
Nookiehunter
I have a plan C and its much better than this,you see I am not such a prognasticator as you
Loved this whole series. If the mother was sexier than Sophia Loren, then she was smoking hot!!!
I couldn't give a rats ass about a tit if there was a pussy in the room. I like B cup tits and an A cup over a D cup. Yep I'm an ass man, not a mommy issues tits man. That doesn't mean anal, I'm not gay. That butt houses the greatest thing on earth a pussy.
"There Is No Plan B, Ch. 01:" - Forty-Two Year Old Married Mother, Cecilia and Nineteen Year Old Virile Son, Jason.
Mother Cecilia is a conniving, fertile and horny married mother.....and she's (possibly) figured her son is ripe for taking his mommy-virginity. Momma fucks her son like it'll be her last fuck for this life time; son Jason can't get enough, and his mother seems to be aware of her son's incestuous sex needs. Let's hope Momma "forgets" her husband is (we hope) sterile, therefore she doesn't have the need for birth control with hubby. Son Jason is virile, horny and has enough baby-making seed for all female "cummers!" Great writing, character roles and unique themed mother/son sex scenes.
"I decided to found out"? You need help. You need better help. You need to not write if you can't do it without relying on spell checkers that don't find the problems.