All Comments on 'Things Her Husband Won't Do'

Haven’t commented before.

I’m not sure how to properly convey this.

Excellent piece. Great style and pacing. Beautiful imagery. Great sex scene. Outstanding use of writer’s voice and internal narration.

Easiest 5/5 I’ve ever given.

You're kidding me, correct?

A very good tale and you close it with the juvenile workd when the final paragraph stands on its own. That make you sound like a third grader or a third rate writer.

and five stars sink away in a heartbeat.

So, there will be a second chapter with a three month pregnant woman. Touching.

I like it, you are not in hurry to rush it up, and the details, I could see how you did it 😉a pro grade.

Keep writing!

Very hot. Nice pacing. Humorous bits. LOVED her hairy muff and the squirting. I hope her second move goes well, she announces she's left the hedge fund schmuck, and they settle down and make a family, with more children on the way soon.

This was beautifully and intelligently written: “cock as an elemental phenomenon“. 5 stars!