All Comments on 'Three'

The story suffers from some blocks of text being large and then difficult to follow. Thus far too long to present the thought, appear to ramble. This affects the quality of the story, causing loss of interest to read. Trim the length to a more reasonable size will be a benefit.

I don't comment very often, but this was a very well written story. I liked the background and plot elements; you set the stage and kept up a weekend at the beach scene very well. The sex was hot, erotic, and believable. Very easy to imagine being Bo (that lucky SOB). Well done...and more please!

Hot!