All Comments on 'Three Sisters-in-Law'

Highly typical indian junk writing. Use of terms and spellings only used in that area without any cross reference to more internationally accepted and used words. Should be pulled off the site until a complete rewrite is done to correct these items.

The statement below came from a jackass. We the readers should be encouraging the authors to write. Obviously English is not this authors first language. He even states that it is not. He needs constructive criticism with specific instances where he can improve the translation of his writing. If I were to write in any one of the many Indian languages my efforts would be laughable compared to what is written here. He will improve if we are tolerant.

Very sound story and well edited. I look forward to reading more stories from this author.

Well done. I enjoyed reading of how your used your cock so effectively. It is good to share sexual activities from one country to another. I enjoyed the detail you gave of the fucking and shooting cum into their pussies. You knocked them up. Job well done. Continue fucking them every chance you get. Everyone wins.

Very well written.What made the story so effective is that that you took the time to develop the characters and did not rush through the foreplay as so many other writers do.The fact that this was first written in Gujarati and then translated actually enhanced the story by giving it an authentic flavor.Your translator did a commendable job even if there are some errors that crept in.Please disregard the uncharitable comments by the first responder. Keep writing. I hope to read more of your work soon.

it is good but could be better if u could give more erotic details in

Predictable,but well written and enjoyable..looking forward to continuations

I have read your story many times and always enjoy it.gujrati girls are very sexy and your story is well written.take it further, please! All the best.

Take the News that Brother fathered his Children and who let the Cat out of the Bag?