by nikki_2021
It is so refreshing to come across a well written story. The Lit is literally littered with good ideas expressed in bad grammar or boring ideas with proper punctuation. I'm looking forward to reading more from you!
WOW WOW WOW! They use "H" to identify stories as hot.. shoot.. H is TRULY an understatement for this one. As a father of two daughters, HOW sweet would this be.
Your Incest is THE Best! This story is Fucking Hot, and so are YOU! Keep on writing, and keep on fucking!
I've always loved your stories and so glad to see your writing again! Another amazing story!
all I can say is Darling Nikki :)
thanks for the great read and the woody
This was soooo HOT and I'm soooooooooo WET! Now I'm ready to be FUCKED!!! xoxoxo
Wow. My girlfriend and I just had a steamy session while reading this story out loud from beginning to end (boy, was it hard to last that long!), and I must say it is by far the best written story I have ever read on Literotica! Awesomely plotted, perfect pacing, with just enough balance between psychological tension and sex scenes, and believable throughout!
Great job!! Pat yourself on the back (or somewhere else ;-) )
A friend told me about this story and I had to come and read it. Just finished it and I have no one here to take care of me. It made me so wet, and it is so hot. Thank you for a super story!
By far the hottest story I've read for a long time. I'm not a big fan of BDSM but the story, despite its appropriate title, was beautifully balanced and had something for everyone - incest, anal, lesbian and mature. I hope there's more to come from this writer.
I had to read this in 2 parts since I couldn't keep my self from finishing when reading the first half. I have always been a fan of your writing but have never commented before. This story was just to hot not to.
Also, can't wait to read it to my wife for Valentines day while she is tied up herself........yum.
Hope this means we will be getting more than one story a tear from you. Missed your writing. SO HOT!
Your stories have never disappointed and this is no exception full of conflicted feelings, dirty thoughts and experimentation. Great read and not so short that anything ever felt rushed although It took Sandra long enough to go down on Lucy the poor girl! Thank you can't wait to see whats next
I've always liked your stuff since the 2020 days. Your a hot and naughty girl Nikki and I love what you do. Please, please do more soon.
you gone and got me all hot and bothered,,and no significant other to help me out here,,,lol,,,,good story,,,loved it,,,liked the pacing,,will she or won't she? how will it work out? not too short or long,,not into bdsm but when i saw your name as author, thought i would chance it,,and was hooked immediately,,,more please,,,excuse me while i log off (pun intended)
Excellent story telling, except for a few spelling errors e.g."...Sandra stared at the neatly cropped raid hair around..." It was well outlined, well written, and not boring. Hope to read another soon, Perhaps a Dad, Lucy, Rachel, and Sandra together.
Your stories are amazing and get me so hot and horny my other half loves it. Read all your stories and love them all keep up the good work!!!
Absolutely loved the shit out of the whole story, thanks so much for sharing :) Happy new year btw.
I would love to read what happens on Sandra's next break from college.
wow what a fantastic hot hory story tied . this is worth a 10+ brilliant writing .
the story second to none . not it will have to be the home cumming fuck
Rantings and ravings about incest or lesbianism aside, it's a good read. I prefer brother/sister to parent/child stories, and nikki has plenty of them. One of my favorite authors. I've read several more than once. If I find a story that I don't particularly like, I stop reading it. I finished this story. Yes, it strayed from pure incest, but I haven't found any crossover, multi-themed categories on this site. Story tags are included as a guide.
Bottom line, it's a very hot story.
What a quandary your 'hero' Devon had to suffer. I could be so lucky. A fascinating concept, written to get to me, all I can say is WOW !
A belated 5*
Hope it can also be found in Literotica's Lesbian Sex section so more can find and enjoy it.
This would be right at home in at least ten or eleven story categories.
nikki_2021, thank you again.
Loads of fun, nice plot twists, yum! Thanks for the great story and originality! :)
So Dad was 35 and had a 20 year old daughter? Yeah and things went downhill from there. Without some additional character detail and with no real compelling or interesting characters involved, this degenerate playtime story just wasn't very good.
bis ich die ganze, ziemlich lange Geschichte von Anfang bis Ende gelesen hatte, denn englisch ist nun mal nicht meine Muttersprache. Aber es hat sich gelohnt, mehr als nur gelohnt. Ich bin begeistert. Jedes weitere Wort ist überflüssig.
Übersetzung:
A hard piece of work ...
until I had read the whole, rather long story from the begin to the end, though English is not my motherlanguage. But it paid off, more than only paid off. I am overwhelmed. Every further word is needless.
Your writing style is so good. Enjoyed the entire story. Happy Trails.
Please pay no attention to the dweeb insulting this story, I thought it incredibly well written, paced and captivating. Kept me excited from start to finish and hopeful for the story to continue :)
Sometimes you can get lost in the names, and you can get lost in the story also;which is not good. The story is palatable.the writer goes off on tangents&leave youscratching your head; wondering if you missed something. Then several paragraphs later you find yourself back in the story, but you are left wondering how you got there?
In fact, it made me even harder at times, reading of all of the wild, kinky games of Rachel, Sandra, Lucy, and lucky Devon. I'm glad that Rachel got past her selfish phase and decided to share and share alike. It was one of the hottest incest stories I've read in a good long while. Well-written, full of suspense, anxiety, mixed feelings, etc. Yes, I am quite impressed and aroused by it. Kudos to the author.
Given the mildly french farce aspect of this, it was one heck of a lot of fun to read. Three girls, count 'em, three, and one clueless yet horny father to keep bamboozled throughout the story. The constant fumbling among them and each not able to act on their desires, even not able to express those desires, carries us on wings of buffoonery to the heights of absurdity. The ending was wonderful, leaving lots of room for sequels. I hope you're up for some.
Yep, lots of lascivious fun! Great work!
I really hope that you'll continue this story as a series and soon! Thanks
I think the synapsis of this story should be changed to "everyone cheats on Devon". I skipped a lot of paragraphs trying to get to the actual incest and it was half of the last page. Very miss leading, 90% lesbian scenes, and I spent all my time wondering where the heck dad was in this father daughter incest story. This must have been her earlier work too because the writing isn't as good as some of her other stuff. Very disappointing read.
Dayam, you have me stirring in places that haven't stirred in 2 years. Beautifully written and thought out, very perverted but fuck, that's great. Thanks Nikki x 😊
This was a wonderful story... Please write more... more like this!
What an erotic adventure. You are an amazing author...
Being a father of a beautiful daughter 30 years my junior (she's now an adult), with whom we have a relationship, we both are very grateful we've not resorted to twosomes, threesomes nor more-somes. True relationships can exist only when the person to whom the love is shared is limited to their sole partner.
The love and friendship of fatherly love that Sandra has for her father Devon is very apparently deep and sincere. She has allowed her lesbo friend to devide her love for her father with other lesbian situations, even though it is apparent Sandra's first and foremost love is her father. In my mind I'm sure she is extremely thrilled and happy with the love she has found with her Dad.
The story is good, a little too long, mainly due to the descriptions of the lesbo trysts. The theme of minor bondage is different, but effective for Sandra to accomplish her life's desire to have her father become her lover of choice.
An exceptionally well written story. full of beauty, passion and desire... Thank you!
Really ?
Tied , handcuffed and blindfolded ?
Alone and unprotected .
Run .
To anonymous 03/19/18. Why?
Try it sometime. It's fun, as long as you trust your partner completely.
I live how you build the story and the sexual tension. I’ll most definitely read the rest of your stories! Hopefully there will be more about Sandra, Lucy, Rachel and Devon!
Very delicious climaxes and the foreshadowing of knowing what was eventually to come. The thrill in how it was going to happen and develop was a delicious treat.
The girl on girl action; not usually my turn-on, but with a cock involved as well, it made it a good story. I'd love to see more of the story adding Lucy to the mix, possibly with another cock thrown in as well. Maybe Lucy could include her 'Daddy' in their play.
Well, you are the author I'm just the pervert reading the story.
Thank you again for a really hot story.
You definitely can write and I’m happy to have found a new favorite author.
Curious about your mindset while writing this story. You created nice teases in scenes where you start the action but leave it unfinished. But the foreplay is much stronger than the finish. Orgasms happen in one sentence. I am learning that for women this is the story; that gushing moment is the sizzle on the steak. But dramatically shouldn't the moment the character gets there be a slightly bigger deal? Maybe not.
Wow!! I thought this was e very hot story! I usually don’t read ones that are this long but I couldn’t stop!! Thank you!
What an amazing story. I really enjoyed it more and more and couldn't take a break from it till the end. I have been in a couple of relationships with 3somes like this, and it was so blissfully satisfying. I sure hope there's more to come of this story. Thank you for a great story indeed.
By far the most decadent and delicious story I've consumed in quite a while.
great story, it been 11 years since the writer last wrote this story, just to bad another chapter wasn't wrote. i could see maybe girlfriend and his daughter getting pregnant from this trip or a foursome with lucy..
Was going great until anal was brought into it. Seems no one can have sex anymore without this unhygienic pastime.
I too wish there was a follow up to this...
And to the one complaining about anal: Don't knock it until you tried it! As a so-called hetero cis male, I don't care for anything bigger than a finger, but a prostate massage at the right moment can be awesome for both partners! And if she wants me to do her backdoor, I'll do it, assuming proper hygienic measures are taken!
This is the best ever. I was excited the whole time I was reading. I could hardly wait for Sandra to go down on Lucy. As it got kinkier and kinkier, Sandra just got more and more interested and aroused. The threesome with Rachel, Lucy and Sandra was superb; Rachel is so hot and full of lust for both Devon and Sandra. Visits home will be more frequent I am sure. 5 stars
Great series! Very well done. All hard..leaking a bit...I think I'll edge to more of your delicious stories. No cumming tho. I like to simmer for a good while. :)
Ohhhh boy! This was one of the best stories I've read on this site. I didnt need the viagra. Hard as a rock. Thanx, keep em cumming.
It was certainly one hell of a story what a delightful daughter and oh what a naughty couple shame Lucy wasn't around to play too.