All Comments on 'Till Death Do Us Apart Ch. 03'

It's death do us part, numb nuts.

I understand now!!! This is after all a crime novel...someone will die soon...The mistery is: Who is the famous detective that will solve the crime? 1*

Death arrives!

to offset the asshole of LIT's 1 vote. Annony is a tired old ugly lonely fag with ED! He ahs no friends on here or anywhere else. All he does is read LW stories and botches about them. He's pissed because his wife left his sorry as and fucked around on him his entire life.

Come on. He's devoted to his wife who threatens him with castration if fucks Karen but meantime she does nothing but fuck another man and insult her husband?

What the fuck is wrong with you?

It isn't just the anons who bashed this shit story. I know you got a hard on for the anons, but maybe you should read the other comments with usernames once in a while. Fucking bitch, your rants are meaningless and worthless, earning these authors one star ratings just to get even with you. They should thank you for the favor, don't you think?

Vote 1* for every story rated by 𝐓𝐇𝐄 𝐅𝐀𝐓 𝐖𝐇𝐎𝐑𝐄 (that's what her clients call her) aka BONNIE/VASTIE aka ANON!

(1) Tags are accurate & anything but misleading: cuckold, slutwife, watching, wife sharing, Indian, threesome...

(2) The story is multi layered in the sense that the author also follows emotional interaction between husband and wife, and gives us a peek into the husband's innermost secret world where thing that give him gratification are emotionally painful too.

Husband is also torn between (a) the societal norms which he hetherto espoused without reservations and (b) his voyeur/cuckold/submissive side which is rather pronounced but had been hidden deep inside his psyche. Essentially he did not know he was kinky; then a strange set of circumstances puts him in a different reality.

The wife is a hotwife & a loving wife 2-in-1! She needs &, in a rather kinky way, loves her husband, but so far, the readers don't know why.

For men who were cheated on by a woman they loved this series makes sense.

In the process, some of them discovere that what was their worst nigtmare is giving them sexual & emotional gratification. For them the plot is more than just pornography, it's their life story.

☆☆☆☆- (3.9/5.0 = 78% = B)

Well, I would say that bitemore could lead this story back out of the swamp that its heading into, if he wanted. So lead on Mcduff......

Guys, thanks for the comments, even the harsh ones. I used "apart" not "part" because there was another story already existing with that title. And apart in our context of >2 makes sense. This particular title is important for me.

I wanted this story to be erotic. But also wanted it to have substance.

I do appreciate if you leave a line, may be suggestions or your thoughts. Thanks a lot.

This is why I don't read Indian stories... Have you ever read one that the guy has any balls? No? Neither have I...

...a loving wife.

At last one Literotica author seems to know the difference between "shuddered" and "shuttered"!

It's time for this wife to end up with Anil, she certainly does not care about her husband feeling empty, she's lost her respect for her husband despite her claims of loving him. Anil is taking the wife away from her husband without protest from her. It is time the husband leaves his wife and move in with Karen, a woman who truly loves him.

You write better than most or the other writers here. Good English. It's not perfect but the mistakes are minor and don't interrupt the flow of the story.