All Comments on 'Time Well Spent'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
More please!

Great story - is it true. Yes, would like to hear the sequel. How about telling us about more about this hot Milf.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
good stuff

Very well written, looking forward to a follow up. ,

samurai7samurai7over 3 years ago
Great one!

Please continue. No shaving please!

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Excellent

I liked the story, I want to see the next chapter

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
The Graduate

Shades of Mrs. Robinson!

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Vocabulary

In addition to the eroticism, the absence of commonalty prose was unremittingly gratifying.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
write as you speak

great story! by all means continue. Write as you speak and this will flow much better. But a very good set up. It should be a fun summer.

Monagamous_NowMonagamous_Nowover 3 years ago

Love this. Like the writing style.

Monagamous_NowMonagamous_Nowover 3 years ago

> In addition to the eroticism, the absence of commonalty prose was unremittingly gratifying.

I concur.

chytownchytownover 3 years ago
Good Read***

Thanks for sharing.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Fun

This appears to be the work of an English professor having fun!

amoroneamoroneover 3 years ago

My feedback is positive. I loved the story. Thank you.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago

That's why I like older women....they know what they want!

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Superb story more please

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Wonderful story...so reminiscent of an occurrence I had but before I graduated college. I openly flirted with a friend of my aunt's. Mrs. Price and her husband had a small cottage on the shore of one of our Great Lakes and I wound up tending her cottage gardens...and eventually HER garden. That said, so much of what you so brilliantly and descriptively wrote is one of the best writings I've read. I will read more. Thank you and please continue writing. Suggestion, what was losing your virginity like and with whom was the occasion?

AnonymousAnonymous9 months ago

Why is the narration in this so poorly worded, or so overly-worded? It's like somebody tried to write it just using a thesaurus. Just very badly distracting and kind of stupid.

AnonymousAnonymous4 months ago

Interesting if a little heavy on the pompo verbosity.

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