by byronbert
Great story - is it true. Yes, would like to hear the sequel. How about telling us about more about this hot Milf.
In addition to the eroticism, the absence of commonalty prose was unremittingly gratifying.
great story! by all means continue. Write as you speak and this will flow much better. But a very good set up. It should be a fun summer.
> In addition to the eroticism, the absence of commonalty prose was unremittingly gratifying.
I concur.
Wonderful story...so reminiscent of an occurrence I had but before I graduated college. I openly flirted with a friend of my aunt's. Mrs. Price and her husband had a small cottage on the shore of one of our Great Lakes and I wound up tending her cottage gardens...and eventually HER garden. That said, so much of what you so brilliantly and descriptively wrote is one of the best writings I've read. I will read more. Thank you and please continue writing. Suggestion, what was losing your virginity like and with whom was the occasion?
Why is the narration in this so poorly worded, or so overly-worded? It's like somebody tried to write it just using a thesaurus. Just very badly distracting and kind of stupid.