All Comments on 'Tina's Daddy Takes Control'

I stopped reading when he called his girl a slut.

Good job with a common theme!

Beating her ass then cumming inside her pussy is not a new idea. Thus, what qualifies this story as crap is the absence of crafting of this story. You rush to the end without either Tina or her dad enjoying any feelings on the matter. Why didn't Tina question why she was getting turned on by the spanking? Why did her dad fuck her without remorse over the incest he was committing with her? If this is the best you can do, don't bother writing anything else. You've not got what it takes.

This was an old story that isn't up to my current standards? Or are you just fucking stupid?

I rather liked it. Hoping there will be more chapters to it. Don't listen to the nay sayers. If they don't like it, then they should move on to someone else's stories. I plan to check out your other stories. I gave this one 5 stars.