All Comments on 'Tinkle Bell Ch. 13'

Having done the pee in the ass trick I know it is not easy. I'm surprised Bella didn't come more.

I others don't want you to continue "Fuck-um if they can't take a joke."

These characters are delicious.

More BDSM and a wedding orgy with a Tranny preacher. Hmm so many possibilities and don't forget Bella's relatives.

These characters deserve a book or two.

It's not often we see a story with such a different angle, an I for one woulld love it to continue. You've done a great job of integrating the 'fetish' with some truly hot sex and creating characters that we can go along with in their explorations. Don't let your readers laziness in voting convince you that this is not worth continuing - it is chapter 13 after all :)

If you do decide to wrap things up, I really hope you'll take your time (story-wise) and do justice to what you've already created.

Thanks for a great read - whatever you decide.

A. Fan.

Great job. Take all the time you need.

I hope you keep this going as long as you can - and definitely leave it open for a continuation!

Great characters - great story - please continue

Didnt like it. Manipuating Bella proposing a challenge DeeDee would normally never accept.

David even agreeing to it. He should have taken DeeDee out clubbing or so, even if it wasn't only to rebel vs Bella.

Sorry he lost (again) the bet.

My first 2 stars.