All Comments on 'Tinkle Bell Ch. 22'

Have loved this story...and so many of your others...since I started reading Literotica. Sorry about your problems and I for one surely appreciate the effort you have made to do this! I hope there are more adventures for them!!!

Absolutely satisfied... on every level. You are a great man.

Thank you so much for writing this. When first read it, i didnt go in order, i just started at 21 and i thought it was dumb. Then a couple moths later i decided to try it again in order this time, and i am truely overjoyed that i did. It was incredibly sexy as well as perfect with the ending and everything. It was also very well written and flowed beautifully. Thank you for this story:)

I'd read all the book one chapters and thoroughly enjoyed it some time back. Very glad you managed to do this last chapter :) Very sorry to hear you've had problems... :( Hope things are improving for you. I really hope that you will be able to get back to writing as I've really enjoyed your work. Once again - many many thanks for all you great work and best wishes for the future... :)

Just finished reading Tinkle Bell from begin to end and very much enjoyed it. Thanks for all the fine story's and I wish you well.

I've just finished reading this story and I have to say it's one of the very best I've read on Lit. Thank you for persisting with the storyline, characters and the somewhat unusual nature of the story !!

Me to you.

As all stories has flaws yours too. Some grammatical some structural. I like it as it is.

A recommendation for next time or future writers: be bolder and explore more gray areas rather than stucking with the safe black and white. And if possible try to surprise more. I was bewildered af when David woke up to him being alone on the boat all by himself. Sad to see it was just a dream though.

I really wonder if they will live happily ever after? I doubt it.

I think Bella is too wild and too dominating, and those traditions like employee's day will start causing problems.

I particularly like the first 10 or so and gave them 5 stars (I very rarely do that, usually 4 is the max) but around there I started getting annoyed with Bella's manipulations, and David's always letting her do.