by Many Feathers
This is like reading a fantasy from my own Pandora's box! Well written. Tiny bit singular in focus. But kept me hard the whole read.
I loved that your story reminded me of how much I love cum on my breasts!
There's not much development in the characters after the initial page. Then the action pretty much repeated itself in only the smallest variations. The amount of cum wasted is not nearly realistic.
Apart from that the grammar and spelling of several words was incorrect.