All Comments on 'To Hell and Back'

Two broken people trying to fix each other, eh? I can see this story as a one-off, or as start of a series, trying to come to terms with each other's trauma by sexual healing. The doomsday prepper angle is one I haven't seen a lot of Literotica. Interesting.

I agree with Kahunabob…excellent premise and I would love to see these characters and their story further developed.

more of theses characters please

Good start, more please. he needs to fill her pussy with cum and make babies.

Nice slow build up and a steamy ending. Thanks for sharing!

need a part 2.

grin/grind. it's the simple things, but in the last few lines of a five page story? Somewhat tragic editing mistake.

I'm with everyone else. If votes and comments can get you to further the story, add my comment, and please enjoy 5 stars. It's all they let me give.

Dewey Cheatham

I agree need to add to this.

I have never had the pleasure of eating a pussy that tasted like vanilla malt mixed with burning sandalwood and peppery dark chocolate I'm afraid.... Anyway, I gave it a 5.

I got around halfway into the first page and it just seemed to depressing to continue.1/5

Really need some editing for format and spelling/ usage.

You do not need help on story or dialogue, though.

Five for you

You need to add in CI back-up from the Bragg Stockade.

No "comments' and vote yet, let it roll, waiting for the next....

On one hand, I'm tempted to give this 5 stars because it's well written and entertaining. On the other hand, it's borderline non-consent (she basically blackmails him into sex), so I don't feel it deserves 5 stars for that.

Honestly this one felt like you’ve been reading to much Soul71

More please!!

Bit different and uncomfortable at times but ultimately pretty hot and kinda sweet at times. Love to see some more chapters. 5 stars.

A lot of the things in this story I don’t like and them not having sex is high on the list

This was a pretty good story.

Interesting story. I like it. AAAAA+++++

I love how much emotion you put into your stories. Definitely one of my top 5 from you!

Jack

Ooooo, lack of STD testing, very sketchy, very bad

A few formatting errors, you need a better editor

Other than that, sweet, dangerous, sexy, odd story of two very damaged people coming together

Nice read

This totally drew me in and tore at a lot of emotion. Easy 5/5.

amazing creative vivid and colorful wording , a skilled writer in the reading 5/5